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Re: You Always Do
Vocals are definitely good enough for a work tape. And a strong lyric. I'm a bit with @BeatlesFan64 re having a rhythm change in the pre-chorus. Just feels like the time for something different. I th… (View Post)1 -
Re: Got A Friend
Some nice picking there! Big reveal in the 3rd verse. Up till then I wasn't sure if it was going to be a drug song!! Much better this way. The ending felt a little short - though maybe it's just that… (View Post)1 -
Re: Lovely Day For A Picnic
Calling it as you see it! This one doesn't appeal to me personally, but it's perfectly well constructed as a song. (View Post)1 -
Re: Tired Ole Bones
And isn't it nice to be a published songwriter? Thought occurs, as soon as you post the song anywhere, you're published. How cool is that? It's a very positive thought, though not the usual meaning o… (View Post)1 -
Re: Take Me To Heaven
I like the melody you're singing. Nice lilt to it. "eradicate" didn't bother me when I heard it sung, "Straighten out" could be another alternative if you want one. I agree on cha… (View Post)1
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