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Re: The Angel Sang Lyrics
I like how the story unfolds in this one Kayla. There's a sense of completeness to it. I feel like the story ended rather than just stopped. I've no idea how it would be set to music. But it has a mo… (View Post)1 -
Re: Angels On The Radio (2023)
Its a strong track. I think you've got the mood right, contemplative and slightly sad. And I like the guitar breaks throughout. I'd like to hear you go bolder on the vocals - really sing it out. Feel… (View Post)1 -
Re: The Convergence
It certainly has attitude! A fed up, irate, frustrated attitude - so exactly what you were after! I think that chorus is strong. And I like the outro. :) You might try upping the drums in the mix. Co… (View Post)1 -
Re: West Virginia
I like the specificity of it, the place names, and references to Katrina etc. Makes it feel grounded and real. But I find it hard to connect with. It may just be because I'm not from that area, but i… (View Post)1 -
Re: Oh no I'm not Yoko (new original)
A self-portrait in song! I particularly the refrain: So how could I be Yoko When I'm a butterfly How could I be Yoko When I'm floating in the sky? There's quite a few change ups in the song. You migh… (View Post)1
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