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Re: She needs to feel loved again
You might want to move the bridge later in the song after you have introduced the "admirer". It's not a big issue, but the "he" in the bridge makes more sense after reading that p… (View Post)1 -
Re: Over You (repost)
@Autopart101 The aim of this forum is to help others with their songwriting. Consider whether receiving such a comment would help you with your songs, before posting it to others. Negative comments a… (View Post)1 -
Re: You Don't Understand Music
Proving that you can write a song about anything! And I agree with Chris, the chorus works very well. Nicely done. (View Post)1 -
Re: Handful of Days
It's a lovely tribute! And a solid song in its own right. (View Post)1 -
Re: Over You (repost)
@Autopart101 Negative feedback on songs is acceptable, and can be helpful, but should still be respectful, and when possible constructive, meaning with specific suggestions on how to improve (View Post)1
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