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Re: I found you in the space you left behind
Hey there Rainy.... the melody reminds me of "Sweet Child of Mine" Very nice! Love the lyric. (View Post)1 -
Fair-Weather Friends
Hi everyone, any and all comments are welcome, while first impressions are most appreciated. Thanks! “Fair-Weather Friends” Words & Music By Tom Tognaci https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=150038… (View Post)1 -
Once
All commentary welcome. Thanks! “Once” Words & Music by Tom Tognaci https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14147534 I Once, can be forgiven! What kind of fool am I! What kind of fool am I? Who makes… (View Post)1 -
Re: "Sadies Bar And Grill "
Hey there, Yeahbuddy... It rambles on quite nicely. Not too much to read into the story, however. It's much like many of the bar and grills in Texas and Cali. It needs some story that sets it apart. … (View Post)1 -
Re: "Alleluia... (How You Saved Me From Myself)"
I like the idea of eliminating the first "how" in the chorus, and then to leave it in place thereafter. I like it as part of the lyrical hook, and it helps in making a good title, as well. … (View Post)1
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