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• https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/20345#Comment_20345

  Appreciate the detai…

  in Way Out Comment by pistol April 20
• https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/20339#Comment_20339

  Thanks, I appreciate…

  in Way Out Comment by pistol April 20
• https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/20322#Comment_20322

  Thanks for the feedb…

  in Way Out Comment by pistol April 19
• https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/20320#Comment_20320

  Thanks for the feedb…

  in Way Out Comment by pistol April 19

• It’s definitely singable and the version you have works well for your intended style.

  in (She Won't) Sail Away Comment by pistol April 19

• Strong storytelling feel with a series of barroom-style snapshots—different characters each dealing with love, loss, or illusion. It comes across as more observational than personal, giving it a reflective tone.

  The imagery is clear and eas…

  in That's How It Goes Comment by pistol April 19

• Strong, emotional writing with a clear sense of internal struggle. It reads more like someone dealing with fear, shame, or depression than a clearly defined relationship event, which gives it a more inward, reflective feel.

  Curious how this…

  in Called me butterfly Comment by pistol April 19

• Hi

  I like the ideas, but was thinking maybe some imagery to back up the idea of flying someone off to Brazil. You know, specifics from Ipanema Beach, Copacabana Beach, maybe even Carnivale. The version with music here sounds like urban …

  in Fly you out to Brazil Comment by pistol April 19