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• This is a great song - love the picking and the chord changes

  in Waiting On A Train (Collab with mark alan skinner) Comment by jgkojak2 February 17

• Could not agree more - someone else should always sing my songs(!)

  in Return To Me Comment by jgkojak2 December 2023

• I would start with the pre-chorus to set up the song:

  Her presence is a mega-force
  She's in me, she's the one
  Her draw is an attraction
  With the power of a thousand suns
  

  (I w…

  in Under Her Hypnosis (lyrics) Comment by jgkojak2 December 2023

• Yes! I real blues tune! Love the Tom Petty sound.

  This one of the better songs I have heard posted in a while!

  Excellent

  in Tips For Modern Living Comment by jgkojak2 December 2023

• Love the lyrics here -

  You need to increase the tempo about 5bpm - that chorus would catch much better if the song were that tiny bit faster

  in Crooked Highway lines Comment by jgkojak2 May 2023

• And yes indeed that's a Yamaha keyboard... used to have a Casio, but after years decided to go a different direction... not sure I'm all that happy with the Yamaha - I may try to flip it and get something else... recommendations?

  in Caged Bird Comment by jgkojak2 January 2023

• interesting point - philosophically, caged birds do sing and are beautiful... but they are not free?

  So introducing the concept after the general discussion of freedom in previous verses, caged birds sing, but its a bit like stale wine...?<…

  in Caged Bird Comment by jgkojak2 January 2023

• This is an example of writing around a chorus. I have had the main part (can a caged bird sing) for years and years and I finally decided to try to write around it.

  in Caged Bird Comment by jgkojak2 January 2023