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This is literally one of the most powerful songs I’ve ever read. Props for even being able to be this vulnerable, and double the props for articulating it this well. Elite stuff.
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Thanks both. Really appreciate the candid feedback.
The razor burn reference is intended as a metaphor for wasted/unreciprocated effort in (as RDM correctly observes) an often dysfunctional relationship. Not intended to be sexist at … -
I hear it as hard(ish) punk rock. Closest comparison I can come up with is Seether, like something that could have been on their album Isolate and Medicate. Tangled emotions intentionally for sure, with some dashes of inherently subjective realism…
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I thought this was really good. One suggestion I humbly offer is that it could use stronger imagery and/or a few lyrics that are less vague. Is there a specific memory or to you could tie in, vividly, to address both?
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This is really helpful feedback. Much appreciated. Thank you!
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This is beautiful. Cathartic to me even as a reader. Hope it brought the writer some relief also.
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