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Both very suggestive! I prefer the second version
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I really appreciate @IronKnee’s help. Maybe in the future it will come a melody…If anyone wants to try, feel free to do it!
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Thank you so much @IronKnee and @OnlyGavin !
I didn’t look at the forum in these days so I missed your kind answers. I really appreciate!
I tried to give life to this lyrics but after 300 songs discarded I think only human can do it…I wa… -
Thank you very much Rainy and Sid🤗🤗🤗They I will take Sid’s version🙏
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Thank you so much Elvis! I always appreciate your help🙏
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That’s true Sid, maybe it is even better your choice if you wanted to be clear for most people!
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I like the song, Sid
I only have one suggestion: as it’s quite obvious that you are using metaphors, it sound a bit redundant to specify it…anyway, it’a a minimal question! -
I liked this story and these verses, in its semplicity ; if it’s a real story I think it’s good to share it in a song!
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Thank you Elvis!
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Well, if a song create so much thinking it must be a rare song!
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Thank you Elvis! You’re right, I’ll write under the video the keywords , while for lyrics it would take quite long (maybe I need a Program different from I-movie). 🙏 🙏🙏
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@bhengen It’all very subjective, but as I said, the lyrics are free for anyone’s experiment.
About saying nothing, you will be surprised if I say that the main sentence of the song took me several years of study and meditation 😂But for other p… -
You’re welcome! Ps. It’s my personal reasoning, not the official buddhist way of thinking
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@bhengen maybe we should discuss in another topic because we risk to loose focus on Elvis’ song. Anyway my first approach to faith was using a psychological definition (also Jung said something similar). God=the center of your deepest desires. (For …
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I loved the music Renee! I only hope that the soldier in you is a soldier of peace. A wonderful reading on these themes could be Tiziano Terzani’s Letters Against the War. A wonderful book.
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@StoneFlowers anyway, even in your scenario, you have to choose a God for living : your god can be money, women, success, your body… I think the best god to choose is love for others, the only god that does miracles…but it’s an illusion to think tha…
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Sincere and very original song. I too have lived the conflict described by the protagonist, then I understood as I grew older that there is no contradiction between faith and science...at least if you consider a faith that is not simplistic and rigi…
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Thank you for your analysis @Hardtwistmusic . Our great songwriter Paolo Conte too uses old rhythms that are somehow hidden in new forms (example the beautiful “Gioco d’azzardo”)
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@sidshovel Great Sid!! You saved my song! I will try as soon as I can using @OnlyGavin’s correction🤗
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@OnlyGavin Thank you so much for the correction. I’ll be more careful in the future!! Maybe I could save myself saying that I wanted to emule that strange form of English used by Bob Marley!😂😂😂
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Thank you @OnlyGavin ! Do you mean that the term “its” is not correct for people?
Unfortunately I cannot change Just few words of a song in Suno (unless there is some feature I haven’t yet discover…)
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That’s true Elvis!!
Anyway I’m glad seeing your beautiful songs can receive lots of views!
Howdy, Stranger!