Insufferable (Original Song)
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WTF. Assuming you set out to link non-sensical phrases together without apparent purpose, you succeeded. Cute phrases, one after the other, without coherence.....just word salad for the sake of being abstract, like a Pollock painting with words. Any one of those lines could be built into an interesting tale of its' own - strung together in this way they are nonsense and pretty much wasted.
Perhaps I miss the point: nonsense is art.
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Woah there, I may resemble that remark haha. There is nothing wrong about abstractness if the artist/musician wants it. If the viewer/listener does not find any coherence or meaning they are allowed to move on. I have come to this forum as a songwriter looking for positive feedback so please refer to the forum guidelines for comment etiqutte etc.
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@The_Big_Gundown - Thank you buddy. Appreciated
@highvibrational - Thanks!
@BucMcMaster - I’m all for constructive criticism but damn.. lol0 -
its a real good production , vocally its a bit hard to understand , But I got it after a few listens
Good job man
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