Last Soul In This Bar

StoneFlowers

One good bar song deserves a...

https://soundcloud.com/user-494998212/last-soul-in-this-bar?si=a0be1e88f05c4d8590ba73624d68b3ee&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Not that long ago I was drinking with my friends

We talked about life and how it might end

We’d laugh about the past and all the stormy weather               

Living for the moment never thought about 

forever

Now I don’t want to read too much into this

Don’t want to sound like a paranoid clown

But I just took a look around and saw

Hell I’m the last soul in this bar

The friends I had drinking and laughing

Have all gone on and left me hanging

And now I’m the only face in the mirror

The years have past they seem so far

Now I’m the last soul in this bar

I’m the last soul

Slipping down a wine hole

I’m the last soul in this bar

The last soul

Stuck here on a stool

I’m the last fool in this bar

break 

The lights dimmed down and I took a look around

At the empty seats in the quiet sound

That’s me in the mirror giving back a stare

From the last soul sittin there

Now I love this place and its pine bar top

For thirty years now it’s been my favorite stop

So many good friends that have past along

Sometimes I see em smiling like they’re not even gone

the friends I had drinking and laughing

Have all gone on and left me hanging

And now I’m the only face in the mirror

The years have past they seem so far

Now I’m the last soul in this bar

I’m the last soul

Slipping down a wine hole

I’m the last soul in this bar

The last soul

Stuck here on a stool

I’m the last fool in this bar

Now it’s time to leave I’m being called by the stars 

And I don’t wanna be the last soul in this bar

Aww the laaaaast soul.....

Outro break 

ElvisNash

Sounds good man

StoneFlowers

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/15237#Comment_15237

Hey my friend. We maybe the last souls in this bar. I love your stuff man...https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=11ltwSFYrpA

That authentic voice and story lines...please pick up the guitar and sing some more for me....

ElvisNash

its not cost effective anymore , I use real players not AI. only a small % of artists succeed in the music biz , After 40 years I give up

StoneFlowers

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/15245#Comment_15245

Yeah I understand, just saying pick up a guitar and, write one, sing one, maybe just you and a guitar.

ElvisNash

I sold my guitar 2 months ago , I'm out of it . partly due to the onslot of AI . I can't compete with a penny a track robot songs , and all the bullshit how great they are

RainyDayMan

That's cool. enjoyed my listen!

OnlyGavin

I like the lyric and the melody, although they seem a little uncomfortable together. The lyric seems maybe to want a slower, more wistful treatment. My toes were tapping as I listened, which has to be great, but I wasn't expecting that from the lyric. Having said that, I really enjoyed the song.

StoneFlowers

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/15264#Comment_15264

Thanks much buddy...this all unfolded from me sippin wine in my favorite bar and suddenly noticing that...