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Re: You Always Do
@TammyB I think what you're hearing is probably just a result of the generic sounding midi-instruments making up the background sound without enough dynamics like real human musicians would have. I a… (View Post)1 -
Re: Drunk Dialin' (revisited)
I like this one a lot. My only real comment is in the chorus, I feel like there's a punchier way of saying: Feels good at the moment Feels bad the next mornin' You used "hate yourself" in o… (View Post)1 -
Re: Step by Step
This one is really cool, though the style does kind of date it a bit, but I think there's room to make give it a more contemporary-vintage vibe. I think maybe it would be cool to mix styles for diffe… (View Post)1 -
Re: Drunk Dialin'
Don't get me wrong @HummerWisdom I do like the original version of the song as well, it just has an off-beat vibe to the lyrics. Almost more like a punk-rock song with the extra Mr Kane stuff. (View Post)1 -
Re: Drunk Dialin'
@HummerWisdom I like the changes. Definitely going a more universally relatable direction. I also like the new pre-chorus / chorus structure you created. I think removing the verses about Mr Kane's f… (View Post)1
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