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Re: Arizona's Not On the Ocean (worktape)
I think you’re right to be unsure about that line — compared to the rest of the lyric, it feels more like “telling” than “showing.” Everything else is strong imagery, and that one line just states th… (View Post)1 -
Re: IF YOU CALL ME TONIGHT (Uke)
Hey Guy, beautiful song — wonderful lyric and such a great delivery. And best of all, it’s so nice to see you here in the forum again. I’m really happy about that. During the pandemic, when we were s… (View Post)1 -
A mid winter´s dream (reimagined)
Back on the old Songwriter101 forum there was a discussion about whether every songwriter could handle every genre. I quietly said, “I could write a country song right away” — even though I had never… (View Post)1 -
"Summer nights" (new)
Since I was 16 I’ve been writing songs. At first just for fun, then for the band I played in, and later — when the internet came along — through various collaborations. About 10 years ago it started … (View Post)1 -
Re: "Sometimes" (the Very Last Song)
@MoraAmaroLaLoba : Es muy especial leer algo así, muchas gracias. Your description was so poetic — “the beauty of the sadness” really touched me. I’m very grateful that the lyric spoke to you in that… (View Post)1
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