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Great lyrics, renee, but do we really want to look behind the curtain? :)
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i agree with @StoneFlowers , excellent lyrics..
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thanks, renee
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can't go wrong with a slow SKA beat.. good dance song
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now, this could be a goth song :) i picture ambient dark music, slow steady drumbeat, haunting female vocals.. or better yet, your lyrics also match the cadence to this song in The Music Plays On Comment by bhengen December 2024
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thanks @sidshovel it starts off a bit slow, but then picks up..
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Thanks for the kind words. That painting actually reminds me of apollo, the german shephard that used to come down all of the time.. sometimes, in the summer we would lay like that... I actually cropped that painting and did a copy
it's no different that crafting a painting.. .. you too renee.
I like the story told in these lyrics.. i don't think genetically we are capable of peace. divide and conquer on a cellular level :)... the music is a good choice, captures the essence of the lyrics :)
truthfully, I like the previous lyrics, they have more of a 60's protest feel to them. like buffalo springfield, the youngbloods. I also like the usage of the drones, which made your lyrics present.. there is something going in nj, that the gover…
Rene, you could change the first line to this
It’s no big secret the government lies
Keepin’ drones a secret is no surprise
From the people, it’s clearly known
Now’s the time for truths to be shown.
This song is like…
Add an harmonica, and it could sound like a bob dylan song :) perfect melody for the lyrics.. in true spirit of goth, nobody wins and we all die , horribly :)
cool lyrics.. catchy tune.. the AI music is perfect for this
great lyrics and excellent melody
@sidshovel so would I :)... not sure if I can do that in Suno... we'll see..
@sidshovel , yes, I was concerned about that.. in my mind, however, I was thinking of a play set to music.. a…
@HummerWisdom , thanks for the comment. I think any normal person would be remorseful coming out of a b…
I forgot to attach the music https://suno.com/song/224e1a4a-2b3b-441e-8a70-9d1f80c6bfa1
very inciteful lyrics. I like how it generates a positive response :)
@HummerWisdom , yes, I think I left that a little abrupt... thanks for the compliment
thanks
@RafaelaGar , that's the problem with suno, your stuck with whatever timing they pick. this was my other p…
@sidshovel thanks., really appreciate it.. was a little concerned about following a cohesive train of thought…
I don't know why you didn't get any comments.. these are greats lyrics and the music choice is spot on...which AI platform do you use?
@sidshovel thanks.. left it abrupt.. haven't this style, so wasn't sure about the structure.. thought I might …
@sidshovel i ultimately liked the cadence
@Hardtwistmusic Thank, i really appreciate it. I'm glad my song evoked such comparisons.
Thanks Renee,, apollo would spend more time at my house than at his own.. he would show up in the morning and not go home until evening.. the song was actually inspired by this painting in Apollo and I Comment by bhengen December 2024
interesting visual.. I picture an autumn day, leaves falling, you are sitting on your porch swing, fresh brewed coffee next to you, strumming away, while lucy lays at your feet.
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