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@RainyDayMan - That's a good idea Owen.. thanks.. I'll give that a shot...
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@HummerWisdom - Thanks Renee, and that's funny. seems like lucy has an ear for music :) .. you don't ne…
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@sidshovel - pleasant surprise.. I actually buble, he has a great voice. is the end of the song off? I'll chec…
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great melody, really enjoyed it
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@ElvisNash - brilliant.. excellent lyrics
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@sidshovel - Sid, thanks.. it was.. so with the right lyrics, it will sounds better..
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@sidshovel - I agree... i struggled with the title.. I had evening poem.. I think i'll drop the music and go t…
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@ElvisNash - Thanks elvis, that's what I heard, which is probably why Suno keeps it to 4 mins.
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brilliant lyrics and a catchy melody. gets stuck in your head :)
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@sidshovel - Thanks sid, truly appreciate it :)
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@sidshovel , thanks for the kind word sid. You have no idea how hard it was for me to not only write it but po…
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@RainyDayMan - Hi Owen, thank for the feedback, having it more upbeat is how I'm paying tribute ,she was more…
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Catchy lyrics :)
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@HummerWisdom - This would make a great blue song it has all the tenets :).. really enjoyed it
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@Barry it's a great song, regardless :)
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@HummerWisdom - in all honestly the whole song needs to be rethought and made more clear, it reads more…
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@HummerWisdom - When you read the chorus, what does it say to you? i'm thinking it's not conveying the …
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@HummerWisdom - How do you say something without saying it.. the mind is wandering as you a driving alo…
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@HummerWisdom - thanks Renee.. here's what I was thinking, and I need to convey this better.. I was env…
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@ElvisNash - thanks elvis.. the more I look at it with fresh eyes, it does seem a little disjointed.. sorry ab…
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@HummerWisdom - to be further depressing, the song donna is about my sister, and the song suspended in …
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@HummerWisdom - Hi Renee.. no disprect taken, you gave your honest opinion about the song, I respect th…
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@HummerWisdom - v2 I meant my sister's guidance.. or I could leave it open to interpretation. I just r…
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I like how the lyrics tell a story.. I like the music, ,it fits the lyrics perfectly
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@sidshovel - Thanks. sid.. i really love the chorus.. it's catchy to me..
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@sidshovel - Ok, Sid, reworked the lyrics and changed the title to Whisky bottle sea.
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@sidshovel - fair points... it is a bit vague.. my thoughts was a woman comes home from a business trip and ca…
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@HummerWisdom - LIke how, again, you speak directly from the heart.. I agree with, I wouldn't change an…
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@sidshovel - thanks. I really like your line, drinking whiskey from a long glass, and not sure what you mean …
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@sidshovel - this was the first one - didn't sound like what I was going for :) in Whiskey blues Comment by bhengen January 2025
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