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@Cove - much better.. great song..
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good melody, but you should bring the vocals up more. the background music is drowning you out.
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@HummerWisdom - Renee, you could write a song similar to Tom's Diner by suzanne vega :).. I like how yo…
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@sidshovel - I like these lyrics.. do you think that didn't even think they might sounds better than don't ev…
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@sidshovel - thanks for the comment.. you can't be older than I :).. I forgot to take out the extra line in v…
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Can you please post the lyrics? it's also interesting that the AI program used Led Zeppelins song - babe I'm gonna leave you as a sample to build the song on.:).. the guitar's are similar. I like how the melody flows like a river :)
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@HummerWisdom - thanks for the comment, Renee, truly appreciate it.. theymusic does match. .again, I re…
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@sidshovel, thanks.. this was a fun song..
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powerful song.
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@HummerWisdom -i Renee, would keep it as is, as it reflects the emotion behind the lyrics. Art isn’t always about perfection. Art is about self expression. Being true to yourself. It won’t always resonate with everyone. Like my song quantum being,…
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@Barry . I think this melody works. I especially like the animals around the candles
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this has a great melody. i think most people can relate :)
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@Barry I think they are fine.. says what you need to say..
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beautiful lyrics, as always raw and from the heart :)
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@Cove = Thanks... I agree about the male version.. much more emotional
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@Barry - thanks barry.. I still think the chorus needs work :)
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@HummerWisdom - Oh, I got the idea for the chorus from the song drift away by dobie gray.. - Oh, give m…
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@HummerWisdom - Renee, I haven't updated the music yet.. I just posted the update lyrics :)
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@sidshovel . thanks.. that means a lot.. being a big fan of billy joel and the way he can tell a story is amaz…
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@RainyDayMan - Thanks owen, i agree the chorus does need work. kept having both the piano man and cheers stuc…
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brilliant lyrics and great melody
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too funny, that's partially my idea for precious moment as it turned out.. wish I could write simple lyrics..love the music.. fit the scene.
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cool lyrics. very profound
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Catchy song.. I agree with the sentiment..
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@ElvisNash . thanks for the comment. I think that you have play dives. I think it's a rite of passage.. yes, I …
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@Hardtwistmusic - Thanks for the likes and comments.. you have some catchy songs.. this gives some …
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