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@robwills - then tell that in your song.. your song really isn't all that thought provoking. you start the sto…
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@Barry - that's the paradox of the man and butterfly, which could apply here also :). thanks for commenting :)
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@OnlyGavin - this is a great song.. reminds me of those played on Dr Dimento's show :). this definitely would be…
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@OnlyGavin -Thanks for the comment. most of my songs are written in the abstract to be interpreted as the listen…
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@IronKnee - if you are going to have an anti AI song, then simply just say it your lyrics, rather than bury in a s…
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@HummerWisdom - Renee, this is a great song, but why is it in general comment section and not the sect…
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@ElvisNash - At least it was fun while it lasted :).. .great song..
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@ElvisNash - perhaps, but this is a theory they are suggesting happens currently. you just don't know it keeps …
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@sidshovel - sadly, it's your own self, just different universes...
@sidshovel - Thanks. I tried to be less artsy with this one. glad you can at least enjoy. might have to disag…
@sidshovel - you could call it awkward moments in time :).. great lyrics.. really paint the picture.. I'm gues…
@RainyDayMan -sorry misread your message. That would work in the bridge@ElvisNash . ThanksI don’t think the title is correct.@RainyDayMan -the outro is death. I could change the bridge to verse 4 then incorporate your changes in the outro. @sidshovel, thanks. I knew this was really abstract which is why I put the outline of each stanzaLyrics we can relate to on some level.@ElvisNash - I agree with sid, this is a great song.. can't go wrong with a good blues song :)
@sidshovel - Thanks sid..
@RainyDayMan - Unfortunately (fortunately?) i have a whole lifetime of topic :).
@sidshovel - my original take was a guy getting screwed by constantly falling for the woman :)..
@sidshovel -did not see that end coming 😲😂. Great lyrics. Had me drawn in@RainyDayMan - this is about when my wife ran out of options and the only option was to let her go.. the piec…
@RainyDayMan - thanks owen.. black ink could have been said differently, and not sure about chariot..
@robwills - can you not hear the fact that , once again your vocals are drowned out by the bad guitar playing. …
@BeatlesFan64 - there is nothing wrong with the production.. the harmonies could be a little tighter, …
@Art - cute song.. i just right clicked on it and selected go to browser and it played
@Johnb68 - very soothing and relaxing.. really enjoyed it
@ElvisNash - there are different types of intelligence. Your intelligence is your ability to relate to people. …
@ElvisNash - thanks.. intelligence is debatable. I remember fondly what my sister was said to me, - your becomi…
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