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Thanks sid.. was lis…
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@Billy_Lunch_Money - I think that has the most likes on suno
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Really cool lyrics. you could use this in a spoken word poetry contest.. your writing is very expressive
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@TammyB - Thanks tammy. Can't wait to hear your next song either :)
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I see that now about…
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@sidshovel -thanks Sid. Originally it was called play with myself. Self is hard to rhyme 😂
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@ElvisNash - I watched his video.. different take than his opinion last year. as they train different vocals m…
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@ElvisNash - thanks for the comment. well. yours is production ready. I would need to clean this up before sell…
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Great lyrics. what's missing for me, however, is the buried metaphors and abstract message. but to each his own ;). all kidding aside, I like how you can tell a story. I disagree with you and elvis. I don't think the end is that bad, but then I'v…
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@RainyDayMan - Thanks for the comment.. the song is about letting go of past memories and growing new ones.. …
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thanks for the comme…
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This is where chatGP…
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Thanks for the comme…
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I cleaned them up a bit better..
https://suno.com/song/477238c8-97cd-49f6-8e12-c573f88a1c96?sh=mEM9gvoOFim5KAcK
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@ElvisNash - this is the 3rd time I actually had to re-work a lot of the lyrics.. :)
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@ElvisNash - the cadence of the first verse seems to be off.. timing wise, do you hear what I hear?
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Thanks for the comme…
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I like that as well.…
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you captured the sentiment really well. the only critique is that unfair and year doesn't really rhyme. but it works.. :)
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It was a long time ago
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Thanks for the comme…
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Thanks . That was ar…
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https://suno.com/song/e89d612b-62eb-4ffe-aa58-06e6c9a9d919?sh=DYzqTMRZUh2CUbsd
I set it to 9/8 time.
sounds li…
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@Billy_Lunch_Money - thanks for the comment/. sorry, I should have stated that this is for the e…
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I just realized that the last verse is only 7 lines not 8 :)
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@TammyB - very, very powerful song.. well said.. perfect choice in music also.. says what it needs to be said, wi…
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@TammyB - thanks for the comment. glad it made you smile :)
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@sidshovel - These are incredibly brilliant lyrics and very catchy melody. well done :)
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