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Okay @bhengen had me lost til I looked up "brane". Does it have anything to do with the following that I copied …
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@RainyDayMan yes, so they say the alternative is worse. Unless, of course there is a Heaven!! 😊 And what a …
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@carroll Your last final line just punched me in the jaw...Ouch! In a great way! This lyric is stellar, not one b…
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@RainyDayMan Thanks so much for posting the lyric. Carrol's lyrics are too good to not be seen and I enjoy r…
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@bhengen thanks so much, Bill and 'sum-gun' I stole from mine and Toney Wrights
@TammyB we've all been there done that! In my case, ain't goin' back again! So I say! Can definitely hear this s…
@RainyDayMan Okay, thanks! I set out to write a song about my experience but wanted to somehow distance myse…
@RainyDayMan thanks so much for all of your suggestions. Just to clarify chords on line 2 & 4 of verses;…
@TammyB Thank you, Tammy for taking the time and for the nice compliment.
Renee
@bhengen believe me, Bill. I was so far off-key when I started singing it made me barf! At least now I'm mostly…
@TammyB I knew who you were from the get-go'; like me. Thanks so much, Tammy for your support. I sort 'a like V2…
@bhengen thank you and I wouldn't mind hearing you sing a song or two of your own. It truly would add more meani…
@Cove okay, Bud. I’ll take your word for it. Tho’ I have far more fun playing and singing along with backing tracks; makes little ol’ me feel the ROCK star, 😂
R.@ElvisNash you just nailed the story of my life! And you're right, 'no girl is an island' tho' sometimes I'd l…
@Cove Just love this song. Such beautiful imagery stated in so few words. Thank you for telling me the story behind su…
Thank you everyone for your feedback and suggestions. Will consider some of them!
Renee
@ElvisNash love your lyric and the hooky music intro. I think this is pop country ? The more I listen, the m…
@bhengen Love your title with inner rhyme, Bill. Very pretty song. Love the way the song comes more alive on "v…
@elvis Yeah, I could probably dump V2 but no, it's not my job to 'lift up the world'. Not all songs can be happy and uplifting; at least not the crap I write. But I am happier when they have some positive slant/outcome. Need to do more of tha…
@bhengen awh, not my favorite verse! Just kidding. Thank you for your honest assessment.
Renee 😍
@bhengen never for once thought ya'd give your secret away! Pretty cool writing process on this one, Bill!
@TammyB the older you get the faster time goes AND the older you get the harder to find love. With age, the list o…
@bhengen what's your secret? shhhh...
Renee
@ElvisNash Thanks very much. Appreciate you taking the time,
Renee
@bhengen ain't even listened yet and am quite taken by your lyric: My favorite is Verse 3; gave me a chuckle. M…
@TammyB SC link now in comments. Thank you for your feedback. .
Renee@ElvisNash The song ain't for everybody and I'd rather not expound on my feelings, at least not here. Thank yo…
@ElvisNash Not really. I got all the 'busy' I can handle right now taking songs as they come....til the well r…
@ElvisNash pretty much, a Godless world. Way I see it as do many. Anyway, can't say I don't try and on that …
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