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@OnlyGavin stunning lyric; especially love the triple rhyme V3! Now, for that sure to be a riot listen....yep! …
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Well, you win some, you lose some. I agree with much of the feedback; mixing the two doesn't work at least the way I've written it.
Thanks, everyone!
Renee
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@sidshovel wow! That's a lot of years difference. Your wife must be a lot of fun and I'm sure she keeps you …
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@ElvisNash tough spot to be in. And having to admit it is even tougher.
Enjoyed you song very much,
@bhengen I believe you may have described Heaven and what it might be like; that's what I got out of this but kno…
@ElvisNash and/or when we get to Heaven it could happen! I imagine, Bill meditates a lot. Can't be for certai…
Yep. Sometimes goodbye is the best thing to do. I suppose you could have called this song either "All That's Left To Say is Goodbye" or the title you chose. Nice job in go our separate ways Comment by HummerWisdom February 2025
@RainyDayMan but ALL dogs have a NAME, lol! 😍
@Art in Ohio! Too funny! Very cute. Love whimsical songs! And I was just at the dentist today but just for a cleaning…
Totally agree @IronKnee with the introduction to your song. AI = human enslavement....until there are no more hum…
love, love, love this lyric, @ElvisNash ! Now, for that golden listen....didn't expect the blues; nicely done. …
@Barry while both versions work, I like the first version you posted better and congrats on the recording deal! (told…
Thank you for your kind thoughts, guys. I believe more people can relate to this than not; sad as it seems. I tried to keep it somewhat light but I can tell you this: since the scamdemic, lots of broke and lonesome folks out there. So, there'…
@robwills great start...but where's the rest? You've really got some great ideas, however to qualify as a lyri…
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@ElvisNash thank you for your kind thoughts. Yes, I'm aware you can pay for play time on air. Just not someth…
@bhengen I'm no musician which should be clear enough by now. I know this song is repetitive as I meant it to be…
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Wouldn't change a thing @carroll . Pain alone can make one feel like not feeling so this is highly relatab…
No thank you, Sid but thanks for posting!
Renee 👅
@carroll Absolutely stunning!! Can't wait to hear the song! Love all of nature that you used so eloquently. Luck…
@Barry that Bridge is just perfect! Saved by the Bridge!! And the way it allowed you to turn and speak directly to …
@RainyDayMan AbSOlutely, you got it and I couldn't have thought to say it that way myself: "Freedom is good,…
Love your lyric @BeatlesFan64 ! Don't often see AABA so much anymore which is refreshing! Now, for th…
Tears....HAPPY tears! THANK YOU so much, guys! You ROCK!!!
Renee 💌
Cool song, Elvis. Love the way you turned it into 'our...' and I love 'breaks in my heart'; cool way of saying brokenhearted! And the back up singers, too!
Renee
@RainyDayMan very sweet song. Took me back to home. Thank you for the memories. Interesting drum beats! …
@OnlyGavin thank you for the suggestions. I'll see what I can do for the chorus; using 1/2 your suggestion of s…
Very pretty song @Johnb68 Enjoyed it very much. I like the way you left parts of it un-rhymed; goes along with the…
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