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  • Thanks yeah I'm aware it doesn't go up into the chorus. After a few listens I got used to it. Sometimes what we expect and what we like to hear are different.
  • Thanks, wouldn't release this with rod singing, but it was nice of him to offer ..

    Think I may add a spicier hook, just need one line
  • That is so cool, most of the stuff I've heard with ai sounds overproduced, seems entering your own song changes that equation.

    Makes it seem more believable and more homegrown.

    I like the feel of this. The only reason to redo…
  • Thanks @IronKnee .

    Started with the hook!
  • Bunp
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  • I like the music, I'm not keen in the spoken word, no reason why ut couldn't be sung to a melody.

    Pretty good
    in eSpy! Comment by Domd July 27
  • Cool. Think I wrote this when learning about double hooks and entendres, never imagining that one day I might throw it down and give it a go.

    Well, the thing is a big question, if anybody knew where she was, then mighta and coulda wouldn…
  • That doesn't sound like folk to me , that sounds like Lady Gaga, the whole thing , mostly in the chorus

    Think it just needs a flashier hook line. still in love with with me doesnt match the over the top intensity in the chorus this has…
  • But they don't get cute that pay money. Only major cuts do that
  • @IronKnee the thing is, nobody could really know how much you wrote, all or a smidge

    Aa a writer I agree, it's just more satisfying if it's your own ideas.

    But to the listener all they will want to know is if it's any good …
  • @ElvisNash
    My point was, it probably shouldn't have been more than a hobby, there was never a chance
  • 30 years ago, if you were lottery type lucky, you could maybe get a cut, but still 90 + percent didn't , so the only people who made money were people who write books on songwriting, and Demo services.

    It was always virtually impossible …
  • So the solution is to pay for demos that never do anything? .

    It's not helping you one bit to not use it

    I get it, it's weirdly new and we're not sure how to proceed.

    I'll take the E Street Band, ANY day, but they…
  • He's allowed to rethink things Elvis s, and he's only using it as a band, that's where I'm headed.

    The only option is to assimilate. I'm actually taking a course in ai, it will help those are in the know
  • Just kidding.
  • Like the idea internal rhymes and the melody, dont listen to Elvis, lol like that little solo at end, you can tell that's your idea cause it's similar to the melody

    This has a 70s vibe all the way

    It's something that's gonn…
  • @RainyDayMan thanks, and I agree it's not really a message it's an observation.

    But I agree, I think the fact that there weren't cell phones while watching a concert made the experience better . Memories are subjective, so everybody exp…
    in The Stones Age Comment by Domd July 25
  • @RainyDayMan lol thanks a actual a song comment

    I have a country folk version of this as well, female singer , much more introspective
  • But to a reader who didn't know that it said what it said.
  • I'm impressed @RainyDayMan! I thought you were a songwriter who used SUNO to compose.

    you didn't see that?

    Elvis mentioned, instead of that ai... too

    That said it wasn't a power response, just a playful one
  • Crazy Train, even though I've heard it hundreds of if times, I can't turn it off when I hear it.

    The harmonies on "going off the rails of a crazy train" get me every time.

    Im not really a metal fan, but he's got a handful of …
  • @Hardtwistmusic thanks I watch videos on consciousness all the time fan of Deepak and a guy named Donald Hoffman.

    It was really a five minute impulse to write it. Literally took longer to do the ai track than it did to write the song
  • People just wanna laugh, something fast and quirky. As I said , she should leverage the views into other videos, I'm sure she made something from YouTube itself, but back end marketing is where she shoulda tried. Might be too late now it was hot at …
  • This video has 15 million views, and might be the dumbest thing ever. Imagine she had something to sell or offer these 25 m viewers

    https://youtu.be/Bje_8Y7KUfM?si=Pk3gGotpaK-fl9FJ
  • It's basically, somebody sees something , tells people at work to check it out, tells their Facebook page, they tell theirs and they tell theirs.

    If it happens to land on somebody with millions of followers it could happen.

    N…
  • Well a viral hit is still against terrible odds, but it's still possible.

    Something funny has best chance
  • As far as being a performer yeah
    A writer maybe not, but still probably a waste of time. I just don't like gardening.

    Always a shot iyf a viral hit, on YouTube, never know. Something really quirky
  • Lol, I meant you in general.

    If you can't claim your voice as uniquely you then game over.

    Even our cell phone recognize our faces
  • Yeah and it's also a legit beef. That's uniquely you
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