Lambs wrath
Thought it would be interesting to take revelations 6 and make song out of it, which I didn't realize before tonight, it' talks about the four horsemen.
Lyrics are mine, vocals / music AI
https://suno.com/song/aa1a61cf-74b7-4081-a44a-cdb33a4a5c8a
[Verse 1]
Last night I had a dream I was dancing
In a field with seven lambs of pure white
In a ritualistic rhythmic heavenly swirl
Shattering seals bearing impending plight
[Chorus]
Sounds of thunder shattering still night air
The moon becomes blood, the sun raven's hair
Heralding forth the wrath of the almighty lamb
Casting judgment on sinners and the damned
[Verse 2]
My dear, in my dream, I've witnessed
The four horsemen of the apocalypse
Bring pain and despair upon the earth
And cast masses into the fiery abyss
[Chorus]
Sounds of thunder shattering still night air
The moon becomes blood, the sun raven's hair
Heralding forth the wrath of the almighty lamb
Casting judgment on sinners and the damned
[Verse 3]
My love, I dreamt of standing at the alter
And witnessing the wailing of persecuted souls
Slain for standing devout to the sacred word,
God's words, as written in the holy scrolls
[Bridge]
My beloved, my most troubling dream of all,
The horrors witnessed before my very eyes
I saw mountains crumble into boiling seas
Heavens blacken as stars fall from the skies
[Outro]
My darling, Last night I heard a voice speak
Who amongst the masses shall be able to stand
For the day of judgement has come upon us
And be one of the meek who inherits the land
Comments
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Almost had me runnin to confession, very vibrant and eloquent.
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@sidshovel - thanks . not sure about this one myself. may come back to it later
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Wow! The music is a great match to the lyrics, the lyrics seem inspired by God. My new favorite of yours.
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Bill,
You're extremely good at painting a poetic tapestry of religious or Gothic themes. You paint beautiful pictures in words. Have you ever thought to take this skill and apply it to say famous historical events. One that springs to mind is "the charge of the light brigade". I bet your words could put us in the saddle on that day.
Just thinkin' out loud.
Sid
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@bhengen I'm more than slightly envious of your lyrics tho' I know as a Believer I shouldn't be...now, for that listen! Music as expected; gloomy, dark and vibrant all at the same time: this song ROCKS! It feels like I'm listening to John the Revelator, all be it a female voice. Love your stuff, Bill. And I was sure to grab a copy of the sheep photo SUNO came up with! 😍
PS: Bill, hate to be a ball-buster, but when I went back into SUNO to have another listen, the word 'Lambs' is misspelled as 'Lanbs'. Didn't notice it the 1st time.
Renee
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@sidshovel - Thanks Sid for the kind words. yes. the song Theodorah, the Harlot Empress and the Pious Empress are all about Theadora of Byzantine.. and interesting read.. I'll look into that. I'm not familiar.
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@HummerWisdom - Thanks for the catch Renee.. i've changed it .. thank for the comments as well..
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revelations ? pretty scary stuff , Suns shining , I don't think about it much . Well until now lol. I tell ya them robots are real good
Sounds good man
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@ElvisNash - thanks.. this is the rare time where the bot got it correct on the first attempt. stills sounds a bit synthy for me. but what can you do?
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They all sound a bit synthy. kinda comes with the territory , I'm sure they will improve with new technology . How old is AI a year or 2 ? I'm sure it will improve
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@ElvisNash - This kind of AI has only been around for a few years.. In general AI dates back to the mid 90's. I was going to get into back then, but for some stupid reason, chose not to
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Well you know how that goes , it will sound more real as technology improves . AI bands and all that
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@bhengen -- You've penned some very cool lyrics. I think the best lines are in the bridge:
My beloved, my most troubling dream of all, The horrors witnessed before my very eyes I saw mountains crumble into boiling seas Heavens blacken as stars fall from the skies
Good stuff! Well written lines throughout! 😀
Cheers,
Joseph
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