Never Lies
https://hearthis.at/elvis-nash-xk/a-broken-heart-never-lies/1yt/
You can try to erase her memory
One fifth of fire at a time
Say it’s water under a burned out bridge
Now green rivers run through your mind
Pretend the past is the past
From happy hour to two a.m.
Tell yourself it’s a new beginning
The same old bullshit every weekend
Ch
But a broken heart never lies
Just like whiskey and beer
The harder you try to drink it away
The more it’s crystal clear
You can convince your friends it’s over
Say goodbye a thousand times
But the truth is you still love her
A broken heart never lies
V2
You can try to escape your feelings
Run away, let your ego mend
Hop a nonstop to Cabo
Find a sweet brown skinned señorita
After the tequila shots are empty
You’re the last two on the dance floor
She’s got her head on your shoulder
But you’re thinking of the one back home
Ch
A broken heart never lies
Just like whiskey and beer
The harder you try to drink it away
The more it becomes crystal clear
You can convince your friends it’s over
Say goodbye a thousand times
But the truth is you still love her
A broken heart never lies
(Br)
Maybe your brain is fried
And you’ve forgotten what is real
But on the inside where you’re sober
She haunts you still
(Ch)
A broken heart never lies
Just like whiskey and beer
The harder you try to drink it away
The more it becomes crystal clear
You can convince your friends it’s over
Say goodbye a thousand times
But the truth is you still love her
A broken heart never lies
Comments
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The question is is using live performances on this …beating out AI ? Will see what a publisher says on beating out staff writers on this song
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@ElvisNash - there are two issues I see with AI, the vocals are all the same regardless of the genre.. the other issue I see is that AI cannot emote.. your songs have human emotions, you put your soul into the song, as it stands now, AI cannot duplicate that.
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Live players make the track crisper than AI , I think
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Do them ooooo's on bridge sound chessey ?
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@ElvisNash - no, they do not. they actual sound good.. they enhance your vocals.. there are a couple times where you have the same cadence as dylan.. it's a brilliant song. very catchy.. you can hum to it while in your car
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Will see what a Nashville publisher says on the 19th . Who knows
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@ElvisNash - at least you are out there :)
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I too like the ooooo's
One nit while listening was this one line seemed kina rushed.
You can try to escape your feelings
Run away, let your ego mend
Hop a nonstop to Cabo
Find a sweet brown skinned señorita Find some sweet brown skin?
I love the whole fifth of fire verse, very cool, and the chorus too!
Good luck in Nashville
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Find a sweet brown skinned señorita, its on the beat , Brown skin ? , might come off as racial
But took a pass or 2 to get that wordy line in...lol
Well see what they say , 90% of the time they pass , then its just a artist song
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I'm in California , My co-writer has the publisher , its either yay or pass , that's the game
You can not pitch a AI song to country publishers , they hate them and afraid of lawsuits. Since Nashville runs off session players , you can see why they hate them . Well that and being sued
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Very true, Elvis. Feeling bad for the 'sweet brown skinned senorita'...as well as the singer. And I doubt you'll have trouble with that reference, tho' I could be wrong. But all I see on commercials and such these days is brown skin so why not in a song? Anywayz, I've had my 2-cents for what it's worth. Love the tune as it is!
And I like it when you post your lyrics. Makes it easier for me to study and learn.
Renee
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Find a sweet brown skinned señorita.
Nashville probably still loves Mexico , its in a billon songs
Will see how it does , I know the game , They like young singers . So see if it dings me , me singing it .
its just a made up story
Sweet brown skin , alarm bells went off . You gotta be careful what you say in commerical songs , Well country anyway , Rap says about anything. The most popular genre with kids
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Any unattended songwriter will fed Redbull and taught to swear
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Hey Elvis, this sound great. Is this SUNO. This sound more organic. I love this!
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No that's session players and me singing Tom . I use AI for melody and production ideas though , But track it live usually in Nashville
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