screw you

a fun song a wrote for a friend.. we were punks back in the day.

he recently had a stroke..

These are the clean words... the original has another word for "screw" ;)

https://suno.com/song/9e5debda-2b0e-483b-b48f-c1ff3bcedd42


[Verse 1]

Sitting in my chair in sea of beer cans,

bitter self-hate, drowning in self-pity

Unkempt, dirty-clothes, unshaven

Grimy hair, fingernails long and gritty.


[Chorus]

screw you. if you think this define me

screw you. if you think this controls me

screw you. if you think this is who I am

screw you, if you think i give a damn

just, screeeeeew you 


[Verse 2]

down, but not out, my face may be twisted

down, but not out, my legs barely move

down, but not out, two middle fingers

in your face, so screw you


[Chorus]

screw you. if you think this define me

screw you. if you think this controls me

screw you. if you think this is who I am

screw you, if you think i give a damn

just, sceeeeewww you


[Verse 3]

I've been down before, rise again

Nothing you can do, rise again.

No matter what happens, rise again,

in the end, rise again,


[Outro]

At the end of it all,  

I always rise again.

Go screw yourself.

hm

Comments

  • ha, just realized the title is wrong - should be screw you :)

  • [Fixed the title]

    This is powerful. Such a contrast between their pitiable outward appearance, and the inner anger and defiance. Feels real and raw and gritty and full of emotion.

    Good fit for the punk genre too.

    It's a really strong song. Sorry to hear about your friend though.

  • @RainyDayMan .. thanks.. this is essentially the emotion he felt after the stroke.. i know what he's going through as i had to go through it with my wife...

  • What a trip! Love it through and through. And yeah, I got a couple of those F bomb songs. I get it! You've got such GREAT sound production and again love the vocalist. She ROCKS! And I love the ending on a positive note. How is your friend? Did he pull through the stroke okay?

    The more REAL they are the more I like 'em,

    Renee

  • Renee, yes the one with the f bomb is more sassy. now i have 3 song stuck in my head. where have all the flowers gone, time passages and so far away :)

  • Dayum man! This one has my old ass ready for the mosh pit. Very raw indeed, the vocals were perfectly matched to the music. High energy anthem right there, great job!

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