Original song - You're going all the way
This is a straight blues song but with my personal touch. What do you think?
https://gloriousmagicalfields.bandcamp.com/track/i-will-be-there
Lyrics:
You're walkin' down the street
You never know who you'll meet
In an alley way
You be best be home there
Your momma is scared
I will be there
You're messin'
With the blues
You got your dirty shoes
You're going all the way
What your daddy don't understand
You were never that kind of man
Now you're on your way
Comments
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Brilliant instrumental broken by an average lyrical interlude.
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You do well in this bluesy style! I think it works a treat.
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Yeah, good guitar riffing. Needs bass and drums and I need to hear the vocal more clearly. Potentially a really good rocker.😀
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Wow! Wishing I could say so much in so few words as my lyrics tend to be wordy. Last few lines kind 'a punched me in the gut. And nice guitar work . . . and I love a unique vocal. Raspy, Raw, Real.
Rock on, Rob! And nice to meet you.
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