Heaven Start Hell End
https://soundcloud.com/elvisnash/when-does-heaven-start-mix-2
WHEN DOES HEAVEN START
V1
I don't curse the damn year I was born
But I've seen my share of violent storms
Avalanches piled on top of hurricanes
How long must I wait to rise again
pre
A man can take only so much punishment
Getting hit from all sides by judgement
Ch
When does heaven start and hell end
See the white flag
Lord I’m ready to transcend
The crimson and the brimstone
gone on long enough
No more winters of discontent
And summers of youth misspent
When does heaven start and hell end
v2
I hear peace can be found on earth
But thats only in a stained glass church
When I walk out those bronze holy doors
There's the world I'm cuttin off devil horns
pre
Turn this lake of fire into paradise
Blessings prayers gospel highs
Ch
Bridge
One day angels will take me on that final ride
Their silver wings opening wide
Like angelic pictures in the sky
Off will fly
Comments
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Got a very cash sound to me l love it .
It's on my playlist
And what is a brimstone ?0 -
brimstone? its usually related to whats in hell
the cliche is fire and brimstone , Bit of a Baptist relgion thing your going to hell if you don't follow Jesus
Thanks
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really impressed!!! What a good job with music, vocals, guitars and so deep lyrics!!
I think the protagonist of the story was rising as he was releasing his words. @ElvisNash
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Well we got 4 million writers on this now , So resing it in 2 weeks
I'm not going make everyone happy lol
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@ElvisNash . . . I think you changed the link . . . but I was able to find a newer version on your SC channel
. . really enjoyed the listen ! . . . seems you've always got that very pro recording, and also some great backup harmonies in this one, I think you are a very seasoned and accomplished songwriter, most inspiring, thanks for posting here.
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I'm resinging it on the 30th , its got the bones , Salvage some harmonys . Got more writers looking at it , So this it
That wanted more anger
Thanks , I have been at it awile . So hell is hell , so go there more
I curse the day I was born
I've survived my share of storms
Avalanches piled on top of hurricanes
How long must I wait to rise again
A man can take only so much
Adjust my attitude... Ha, who are you to judge
Ch
When does heaven start and hell end
See the white flag
Lord I’m ready to transcend
The crimson and brimstone
Choking me too long
This feels like close to death
I hope it’s not too late to repent
When does heaven start and hell end
V2
I hear peace can be found on earth
But life’s not lived in a stained glass church
In the ring of a lonely steeple bell
I hear the world ain't doin' so well
Ravens surround me on every side
Their wings like black flags in the sky
Ch.
Bridge
One day angels will take me for a ride
To the clouds, to start my endless life
And no one will ever wonder why...
Ch
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if I knew how to use pro tools I'd have a mansion on a hill by now , but does that really matter at 70 years old , Well not really
Besides its more fun at a studio and bad jokes with a producer , Usally on my part .
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Hi @ElvisNash
I don't know if it's an issue my end but I'm getting 'this song is unavailable'?
Gladly listen when able. 👍️
Cheers,
CCB
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Yup, I can't hear this either. Look forward to it when it's there.😀
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https://soundcloud.com/elvisnash/when-does-heaven-start-mix-2-1
Its being resung on the 30th , The song has decent bones , So try again , See if its any better
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Another good song @ElvisNash - if I had one nit it would be I'm not a huge fan of the drum snare - feels a little busy and distracting but I guess that's a personal thing. The Chorus is great and grows as the song progresses. The backing vocals are great - alongside your always on point vocal. It will be interesting to hear how you sing it when you go again. 👍️
CCB
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I could ask producer on snare , Not that I'm fond of singing it again lol. Salvage some harmonies .
Well we could crack more jokes on the world in studio , all that jazz
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They'll probably get sick of drum machines in 10 years , hire real drummers again , Who knows
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If AI doesn't get so good it can accurately replicate a human drummers instincts - probably already can. AI Ringo is probably being booted up as we speak.
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Right , Bring on Ringo and not robots lol. In 30 years robots will write all the songs , Push a button a love song , WA LA , it analizing every hit then replictes all of them . That when heaven starts and Hell ends
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The lyrics are really quite beautiful and lyrical, but listening to it I do feel like sometimes the tone of the vocal melody doesn't seem to match exactly with the tone of the lyrics. Like if I tune out my brain and don't listen to or read the the words, the track sounds too upbeat and happy by comparison to the gravity of the lyrics.
I'm sorry that I'm not more knowledgeable about my music theory, but I feel like it needs a more minor or bluesy tone, though I'm honestly not sure what key the song is currently in.
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Well my knowledge which ain't much , the majors use upbeat tracks to a downer song , If it was sleepy , It be to depressing
I forgot what key its in , Its a bluesy G lick what ever fret I'm on could be A# I forget
He does that
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So Brett on his is real upbeat , she left him in the song , but you can't tell she's gone . your not depressed like old country used to do in songs . I'm not going to slow it down and cry in my song. its a bit of a attitude in it
thanks
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Now its done
https://soundcloud.com/elvisnash/when-does-heaven-start-mix-3
I curse the damn year I was born
I've survived my share of violent storms
Avalanches piled on top of hurricanes
How long must I wait to rise again
A man can take only so much
Adjust my attitude... Ha, who are you to judge
Ch
When does heaven start and hell end
See the white flag
Lord I’m ready to transcend
The crimson and brimstone
Choking me too long
This feels like close to death
I hope it’s not too late to repent
When does heaven start and hell end
V2
I hear peace can be found on earth
But life ain't lived in a stained glass church
In the ring of a lonely steeple bell
I hear the world ain't doin' to well
Ravens surround me on every side
Their wings like black flags in the sky
Ch.
Bridge
One day angels will take me for a ride
To the clouds, to start my endless life
And no one will ever wonder why...
Ch
Sold my soul to rock and roll should be fishing on a boat
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Hi @ElvisNash
Love the energy in this one - driven by those acoustics. Nice percussion. The guitar is sounding spiffing and your vocal sounds wonderful - declaratory and strong. Really commanding performance.
How do you feel about it?
That asked - Congratulations from me, bud.
CCB
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Its better then it was for song produced at minmal cost , I'm not beating majors with big budgets to spend
I hear em alot going on in them
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Wow wow wow wow
Your song inaugurates my ears this morning!!!! Wonderful work!!! Coo siempre chico!! @ElvisNash
Too hot there? Here we had 32º in the night!!
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Listening to mix 3. This is fabulous. I really like the lyrics to this one. Great production - but your songs are always really well crafted. I really enjoyed this.😀
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hot here too , 100 degrees , Swamp coolers don't work , you need real air con . Moble homes have no real insulation , At least its paid for , I could careless on Mansions
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I work real hard on lyrics , its a puzzle
thanks
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