Hurricane (Lyrics by Carroll Kiphen)
Sometimes, the music and a lyricist connect online . . . which is what happened here.
Thanks to Carroll Kiphen for sending me so many great lyric ideas, and helping this one become a song . . .
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Love that groove! The bass line is so funky!
Love the change up for the bridge too.
Great collaboration. Quality song.
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Cool song man , nice writing on it , its tight thruout
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I like how you captured the feeling of chaos and confusion in the rhythm, vocals and instrumentals. Very well done all around and maybe a metaphor for life on earth at the present moment. Cheers, HV
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Much appreciated Owen, I found the Bridge really fell in place easily, since it was already written in the lyric, funny how that works.
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@ElvisNash . . . thanks for listening man, glad you liked
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@highvibrational . . . thanks for confirming the music and lyrics go together ! Of course I've heard it so many times, difficult to be subjective anymore . . . yes, sometimes I feel like I'm living in the eye, and always aware there is a hurricane all around me.
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Another great collaboration! The song has a good rock vibe, with cool lyrics, a solid musical performance, good production, good arrangement, and excellent vocals. I enjoyed listening! Nice work!
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An other great song i've worked whit carrol to he's a great song writer
Done two songs whit him
Scars / and firefly.s
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Hola @popitup
I like the song, it has a lot of movement, interesting changes that keep the listener interested. Good all here!
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The guitars won me over right away. This is a clever collaboration. Great vocals and lyrics, but it's the arrangement that makes this one a winner. I really enjoyed this. No crits from me.😀
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Fantastic groove. This is a great write..... lyrics, melody, and music.
You sing this in a very compelling voice.
Good stuff, man................
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@icystorm . . . thanks for the listen, and very positive comments !
@remfire . . . hello, yes . . . Carroll really has a great way with the lyric, he used to post on this site before the changeover to the newer format. I looked for the 2 songs you did with him online, and was able to listen to "Scars" . . . good job on that one !
@MoraAmaroLaLoba . . . thanks for listening, always great to hear your upbeat comments.
@ChrisPrice . . . thanks so much Chris for the listen, and glad you enjoyed !
@IronKnee . . . thanks so much for the great comment ! (I actually started this as an acoustic guitar only piece, then decided the chorus needed to rock a bit more for the lyrics sake . . . might have to do a looser (Stones) full rock song version at some point . . .)
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Hi @popitup
I was pleased to revisit this little baby - as I am all of your songs. Nice lyrics and my congrats to Carroll Kiphon on them. The music is sublime. Your guitar work is of such a high quality. Some funky bass work that holds things together well. I wish I could sing as well as you - you have such a malleable voice, it suits all styles. The way you integrated the hook is superb.
Well done,
CCB
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