The Watcher and my Wife
Lyrics - Me; Music - Suno
https://suno.com/s/re8KHIo06wh1daIW
[Verse 1]
I've been at sea longer than I cared to be
But the fishing was good, can't complain
I'll be with my Thea in a matter of days
We'll share a kiss and warm embrace,
Life will be grand again.
[Verse 2]
The skies seem ominous today, dark clouds.
No matter, my Thea will bring light from dark.
Wow, that thunder sure is ungodly loud.
One would think that God himself is upset.
And sent the angels down in retribution
[Verse 3]
Not sure why Thea stopped writing letters.
No matter, I'm sure she had good reason.
Home stretch, but something's wrong,
Spent to much time at sea, my vision's off
That cant' be a baby, a very large baby
Wait, that's Raphael, what's he doing?
[Verse 4]
My love, my darling why are you crying
Why is there a large baby in the yard
And why is Raphael dragging that bound angel
Is this why you stopped writing letters?
Is this because of my long time at sea?
Somebody, please tell me what's going on
[Verse 5]
Suddenly, Raphael and the bound angel vanish.
Another angel appears and whisks me away
Tells me I'll be safe here, but where is here?
Is this heaven? Have I died? No? oh. that's good
Where is my Thea? Why can't she join me.
What's this about a flood? for how long, oh.
[Verse 6]
The skies clear, birds sing, the sun shines
The angel takes me back home, no Thea
I turn to ask the angel what happened,
But the angel vanished as quickly as he could
Not much left of the home with the flood and all
Guess I could rebuild later, what's that sound
Baby crying behind the last remaining wall.
Damn. that's a big baby.
Comments
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if your out at sea , how can Thea write you letters . Ya kinda lost me on this one Bill
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Thanks elvis, they come into a port, that's not the point. I glossed over that :)
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WEll you'll see God out in that ocean , and he gets mighty angry with 20 foot swells that will kill you , Seen that done that . Rouge waves that come out of nowhere . oh puking trying to get your sea legs , floating like a trout bobber 40 miles out . Holy Shit here comes God. Yeah but the salmon are out here to catch on this commercial boat , Yeah but will make it alive back to the harbor ? Well just sing into the mystic by Van , will. be alright . Where Pauls boat ? He died drunk going to a bar about 900 feet from shore in a harbor in a row boat . Don't pay attention your dead
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I was mixing two books. the Odyssey by Homer and Enoch's book 1 - the watcher, which explains why God really created the flood, interesting read. oddly the books of enoch was omitted from the current bibles :)
You know thank God, you are around to comment on my song, otherwise, i'd be sitting in my own funk wondering why the other members don't like my songs. Is it the musicality? bad writing, they don't get it? 😫😂🤣
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Your the only person on every forum that has a sense of humor , they're probably going to drop dead from being to serious . Well a few waves almost killed me , but I have 9 lives . You mean I'm dead cuz I took offense to robot songs ? Well now what, this casket has no windows , And Im staring at a dark ceiling . Is somebody playing Johnny Cash 6 feet above ? .Cant be ex wives they hate my guts . Ive got no one to talk to but a gopher. Well they pumped enough chemicals in me , I should look great for 600 years .
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I think talking to gophers is the least of your worries :)
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Wow! I love this. That's some band and a hell of a vocalist! I honestly wouldn't know it's Suno. It's getting too damn good!! Liking the lyrics too. A great track. I really enjoyed that.
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Thanks Chris.
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It's brilliant Bill, you take one genre, two books, a bunch of lyrics, throw them in the mixer, turn it on full and serve up whatever is on the plate. How can you not like it. Sid
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Thanks Sid :)
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ha ha ha , Well they don't much to say anyway , Nice 6 feet under isn't it ? Nice condo . Are you appreciating this hill side view they talked you into ? My casket came with a bell . So If I ring it , they can dig me out . You aint dead , naw passed out in a strip club in Nevada . Sorry we did hear you all that lawn motor noise cutting grass, at St Angels Cemetery and your dead . Maybe you guys should rethink that name . Naw we like it , cuts to the chase . We are not segregated. That guy next to me was rich
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Yeah I kinda like your choice of music here. A little un clear as to where the lyrics are going here though. Guess I'm a bit like Elvis here lost on this one too.
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tiny brain, it's not a wonder :)
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