THE DEVIL TAKES VISA

https://suno.com/song/1f1c7970-267c-4aef-b564-4e8097109021V1


I rolled into town with a pocket full of dust,

Neon cross flickered, said “In God We Trust,”

Bartender laughed when I laid my cash down,

Said “We don’t take that kind of relic in this town,”

V2

Preacher on the corner with a tap-to-save sign,

Said “Salvation’s instant, just a small decline,”

I asked where the devil does his business these days,

He said “Right down Main—he’s got contactless ways.”

Chorus

The devil takes Visa, don’t bother with gold,

He’s upgraded his pitch, still buying your soul,

No smoke, no fire, just a terminal light,

Swipe it forever, never pay it outright,

You can run like hell but the debt’s got a name,

Every sinner’s number in a high-interest flame,

Yeah, the crossroads changed, but the deal’s just as nice—

Sign on the line… yeah, the devil takes Visa tonight.

V3 (4 lines)

Found him in a strip mall, suit pressed clean,

Smilin’ like a lender in a borrowed dream,

Said “No need for blood, just agree to the fee,”

I signed for tomorrow… he collected from me.

Bridge (8-beat musical)

(Instrumental — 2 bars / 8 beats total. Drop to drums + bass only, hard stop on beat 8, then slam full band back into final half chorus.)

Final Half Chorus

You can run like hell but the debt’s got a name,

Every sinner’s number in a high-interest flame,

Yeah, the crossroads changed, but the deal’s just as nice—

Sign on the line… yeah, the devil takes Visa tonight.

Comments

  • I love both the premise and the cynicism of this one!

    Preacher on the corner with a tap-to-save sign,

    Ouch!

    Suno's given you a fairly standard sort of song, but I understand it's a placeholder for someone recording it for real.

    I love the lyric!

  • ElvisNash
    ElvisNash Calif
    edited April 29

    I'm testing all of them in just acoustic , without all the bells and whistles see if can cut it

    All them rock bands of the 70ties dressed like girls and sang about the devil , So its nothing new . I guess when they got home to families , there wives would say well how did it go , Oh fine just singing satan songs , Is dinner ready ?

    Thanks man

  • Well sleep 4 hours a day , write a song a day , I think I need sleeping pills

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