Shhh
Words Me; Music Suno
https://suno.com/s/1An79b8xDdQz8znV
[Verse 1]
Sleepin inside a circle so he doesn't come near
Tellin me things I don't wanna hear
The voice in the corner makin' me feel small
The Shadow is why I (can't sleep at all)
[Verse 2]
I read the good book every single day
But it still doesn't keep the demons at bay
They escape my mind and dance on the wall
Becoming shadows, so I (can't sleep at all)
[Verse 3]
Outside my window the neon hums a horrible tune
The harmonizing black dove sings, it will be soon
Slow (tic, tic, ticking) of the clock on the wall
Repeating will be soon you (don't sleep at all)
[Verse 4]
The shadow repeats one two three one two three
Soon, very soon, you will be free, with me
Now I hear rhythmic footsteps in the hall
My head voices telling me, (no sleep at all)
[Verse 5]
It leaps from the wall, the shadow does
His voices are buzzing (buzz buzz buzz)
Growing quickly from small to very tall
Randomness is why I (can't sleep at all)
[Bridge]
Soon we start waltzing, round and round
A voice is not a voice without sound
The shadow now small, returns to the wall
Another night, I (won't be sleeping at all)
[Outro][Gentle Fade out]
Today is the day
click click click
Is all I have to say
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Comments
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Good one. It reminds me of Mora’s songs
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Thanks, my attempt as horror, not sure if it landed or not 🤣
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Not sure I get horror from it. It made me think of someone with a psychosis.
But I think it gets you in, certainly kept my attention!
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Thanks.. at least it keeps your attention :).. i'll take that :)
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Yup I like that . not really horror
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is it creepy? I ws going for more creep factor. with a bit of horror, so I need to work on my horror writing :)
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For me it was unsettling. It felt more like an outer representation of inner demons, and for that reason it didn't feel as creepy as if it was something external, but certainly disturbing.
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Thanks Owen.
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Get married again . the horror steps in on the wrong one . You'll have that written in no time . Well they say the best songs are written while you're in a nightmare . But I would not recommend it . Then you get bored on crying she left and have to write a love song . Well maybe a beach song , switch directions
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Maybe a love song set at the beach :)
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Yes that would work , Make it in Thailand , I'm sick of these in Mexico songs . You guys are just cheap on Jet Blue tickets . Don't forget the Tiki drinks , thats mandatory on every beach song
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i was thinking Ibiza, a bit pricey, but they are spanish women ;)
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Anything place but Mexico lol. I'm tired of seeing Cabo . it was a long flight to Ibiza . These listeners , where the hell is that . Well I don't know but the next line said Tiki drinks
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we seem to be the only two conversing :)
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Yes , well your a few laughs
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I'm here reading...
You two seem to be getting along and having fun.
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Wait until you read my next song 😂
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ha ha ha
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