Fly you out to Brazil
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[Chorus]
I could fly you out to Brazil
Girl, I wanna see you in that bikini
Girl, when you undress, I get that feeling
That feeling that you know
You already know, already know
[Verse 1]
Come on, let's watch a soccer match
I could introduce you to my favorite team
If it gets too hot, we can get some açaí
The perfect place would be you and me
But girl, I wanna take you to the beach (let's go the beach)
[Chorus]
I could fly you out to Brazil
Girl, I wanna see you in that bikini
Girl, when you undress, I get that feeling
That feeling that you know
You already know, already know
[Pre chorus]
So many cool places we could go
So many flavors you could try
Girl, I just need you to say the time
So I can book you on the flight (get on the flight)
[Chorus]
I could fly you out to Brazil
Girl, I wanna see you in that bikini
Girl, when you undress, I get that feeling
That feeling that you know
You already know, already know
[Pre-chorus]
So many cool places we could go
So many flavors you could try
Girl, I just need you to say the time
So I can book you on the flight (get on the flight)
[Chorus]
I could fly you out to Brazil
Girl, I wanna see you in that bikini
Girl, when you undress, I get that feeling
That feeling that you know
You already know, already know
Comments
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It sounds really cool, just not sure if it's structured correctly. maybe drop the chorus after verse 1? that's my thought. I'm sure Elvis or Rainy might know better than I.
But, I love the vibe.
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Love the syncopation! And yeah, it really is a cool sound! Only thing I'd like to hear is a bit more bass.
I think the lyric is secondary here, but it all flows, and the timing is nicely in sync with the music - very smooth.
I enjoyed listening to that! 😀
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Thanks! i'm glad you liked it.
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Thanks Rainy!
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No Crits, here... I just liked listening!
Very positive... very nice.
Great beach music!
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Never heard of a song with one verse . But it's a beach song . There Quiet poplar ,Chesney was a master on them
Sounds good
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Beach songs for some reason its always Mexico in Nashville songs, you know guys there other places to go like Thailand . Brazil does have some beautiful women
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its a C/V/C/ pre C/C/ Pre C/ C song , I guess you broke the rules , I have never seen that
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Thanks Iron
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I thought about it too, but there are quite some popular songs with only one verse
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Thanks!
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Never heard one , it would seem it would be hard to get a evolving story to make em work
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u4FF6MpcsRw
its said its one verse song , not to me
Well in country anyway , its always 2 verses to get the story across with new info each verse . They usually have Tiki drinks , sun sand and meeting some señorita . Chesney was the islands and the bahamas , He's so rich he probably owned a island lol
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Hi
I like the ideas, but was thinking maybe some imagery to back up the idea of flying someone off to Brazil. You know, specifics from Ipanema Beach, Copacabana Beach, maybe even Carnivale. The version with music here sounds like urban USA. How about something more Brazilian in sound too. Just a thought. Keeping it fun but sensual with more of a Brazilian musical vibe. Maybe even add something mouth watering from the local cuisine to entice the lady of interest.
Beginning with the first verse that leads into the chorus rather than starting off with it might be stronger as well.
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Exactly , if your not adding a v2 , at least add more to the story in pre's These Beach songs are usually the same , stressed out the states , cuz I've written them . So give us a fresh idea why you're going to Brazil . it's always a flight . how about driving to Brazil and they're always in a bikini with tan lines . They speak Portuguese, you could use some of that
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Kewl music, but why does it sound so familiar like I've heard this melody and echo thing before?
I'm pretty stuck in the country/pop genre so I'm probably not an expert in this area.
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Because you have, it's a main staple of EDM / Pop music. there is a whole slew of beats, loops, etc.. that are reused in this style of music. it's common.
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Dominic Fike - Babydoll (Lyrics)
Look this one, quite popular. It's C/V/C.
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I thought about it too. I would write about different places, and I would mention my favorite team, but then I decided to focus on the chorus so it could be catchy and keep the vibe.
Thanks for your feedback.
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The topic is beach songs , The angle is hard to make it fresh . cuz they've done alot of them
I'm not concerned with the structure on one verse songs
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Yea, Exactly what bhengen said.
Thanks for you feedback tho. I'm glad you like it.
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Yeah, I get it now. Btw, a lot of comments, that's cool.
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No worries
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