Start again - Dreams and Vices
That Giant One - Start again (Dreams and Vices) #songwriter #song #newmusic
[Chorus]
Tired of running in circles
A lot of dreams and vices
Put the gun down
Put the gun down
Don’t shut me
It isn’t the end
Let me start again
[Verse 1]
I wanna stand, change my path
Don’t ask me to do one more time
I’m getting tired of dancing
Another step, Another round for them
Don't ask me for drink
But let me take a sip
When I drink, my confidence comes back
I swear I’m not addicted
I just like the feeling
I’ve been like this since a kid
I think it’s normal
Everybody does the same
Those who don’t are lame
I remember my first time
I was moving, dancing and dancing
But wait…
[Chorus]
Tired of running in circles
A lot of dreams and vices.
Put the gun down
Put the gun down
Don’t shut me
It isn’t the end
Let me start again
[Verse 2]
One-on-one, you can’t beat me
I’m the beast
They call me the biggest big
Just wait ‘til it hits
I feel like Superman
But don’t ask for another hit
But give me a line
Cut it in little pieces
I swear I’m not addicted
I just like the feeling
I’ve been like this since a kid
I think it’s normal
Everybody does the same
Those who don’t are lame
I remember my first time
I was moving, dancing and dancing
But wait…
[Chorus]
Tired of running in circles
A lot of dreams and vices
Put the gun down
Put the gun down
Don’t shut me
It isn’t the end
Let me start again
[Bridge]
If everybody does so it’s fine
Let me dance just one more time
If everybody does so it’s fine
Let me dance just one more time
[Verse 3]
Can’t break the circle
I’ve been feeling tired
My body still moving
dancing all night
When was the last time I ate?
I don't need any help
I swear I’m not addicted
it's normal everyone does the same
But wait…
[Final Chorus]
Tired of running in circles
A lot of dreams and vices
Put the gun down
Put the gun down
Don’t shut me
It isn’t the end
Let me start again
Comments
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cool sound, lyrics flow well with the music. 👍️
in the chorus did you mean to put "Don't shut me " or "Don't shoot me" ?
feedback ideas i noticed =
the line - "Those who don’t are lame" i feel like there could better more clever line here and still hit the rhyme.
the part just before the final chorus "but wait.." could be a good spot to put in a some sort of break down or change in pace in the music where it gets heavier or softer or something for 2 bars then goes back to melody into final chorus.
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Thanks for you feedback!
It's "Dont shoot me".
Good idea about the "but wait".
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