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bhengen · March 12

Words - Me; Music - Suno.

This one I did before but cleaned it up.

https://suno.com/s/DSA3G7wjZU05GdAw

[Verse 1]

Mornin's colder than normal

Always seems on this day

Starin out the window

Mist rolls in never stays

[Steel Guitar solo]

[Verse 2]

Grabbin' the book and keys,

Rushin' out the door,

Runnin on the wet grass,

Nearly slipping,

Arrived.

[Steel Guitar Solo]

[Verse 3]

Clear the ground,

Arrange the flowers,

Spread the blanket,

Read from your favorite book.

[Violin Solo]

[Outro][Spoken softly]

Wishin' this day was never

Wishin' someday

[Pedal steel solo]

ElvisNash · March 12

Thats a cool melody man . Whats it about man ? Grave yard ?

bhengen · March 12

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/19025#Comment_19025

Thanks Elvis, working on my showing not telling style of writing, yes, that's the scene I was trying to set.

MoraAmaroLaLoba · March 12

Sometimes I think about working differently so I can write more songs because, honestly, I feel intimidated seeing the volume of stories you and other forum members post... I like the story and the arrangement Suno made; he's learning a lot about what you like, I get the feeling—I mean, he's getting to know you, I don't know if you've noticed.

I liked it very much

Moara

bhengen · March 12

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/19031#Comment_19031

Thanks Mora, but the style prompts are from 4 different AI, I come up with the concept of what I want, then it's a matter of dialing it in. for example, when I cleaned this up, I had Conway Twitty in mind, but after a couple of tracks, Johnnie cash popped into my head. so we revised the prompt, then it needed something on the backend, so it was either acid-trance or dark trance. Gemini, gave me the syllable count for each line, which told me I was on the right track :)