Ride the porcupine

bhengen · March 7

Words Me. Music Suno

https://suno.com/s/rysdwNLtxnEL54Xx

[Verse 1]

Standing on white sandy beach

Talking to a rabbit with a bowler

He said you'll never not find

What you're not looking for

If you ride the porcupine

As your answers are

[Verse 2]

I fall between the slits and ride

The wave parts, finding atom

That tells me to reach the cosmos,

Ride the porcupine, but, you must

Find that you is what you are

You is what you are

[Chorus]

The answer within the quills

Let them be your guide

Sharp and to the point

Ride the porcupine, ride

[Verse 3]

Inside a strawberry mansion

A mushroom melting toad

Tells me that I'll never

Be what I'm never to be

Until I ride the porcupine

Ride the porcupine

[Verse 4]

Sitting surrounded by mirrors

Reflections of something to be

I climb in searching for meaning

A voice inside says the rabbit

Is where you'll find the porcupine

Find the porcupine

[Outro]

Ride the porcupine

Ride the porcupine,

Ride

ElvisNash · March 7

ha ha ha , very funny Bill

bhengen · March 7

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/18845#Comment_18845

Thanks elvis. there is a hidden meaning :)

jgkojak · March 7

I'll bite - love psychedlia - definite Jefferson airplane feel

I feel like it needs some sort of more upbeat section either as a middle eight or at end for contrast

bhengen · March 7

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/18850#Comment_18850

You’ve got a real habit of suggesting a middle eight on anything psychedelic. This one isn’t built for that. It’s a prog‑leaning introspective piece where the verses intentionally spiral without breaking tone. An upbeat detour would undercut the whole point. Not every song follows a pop‑structure template.

MoraAmaroLaLoba · March 7

Well, I don't know what I've been reading, but it's been entertaining. It's not far from reality if you squint a little... That's what the monsters around us look like.

Pretty amazing, what kind of tea are you drinking?

Viva España

MuskieBait44 · March 7

I don’t know what the hidden meaning is, but it’s fun and sounds good, reminds me of journey to the center of your mind, and other songs of that era I can’t remember. 👍

bhengen · March 7

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/18857#Comment_18857

Thanks mora, that's high praise coming from you :).

I drink the same tea as Dali's his is slightly stronger 😂

bhengen · March 7

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/18861#Comment_18861

Thanks, it's about self-discovery

RainyDayMan · March 8

It's a cool sound! If you've crafted the prompt to get it that way then kudos!

Love the 'ride the porcupine' phrase. To me it sounds like choosing to be uncomfortable, especially in your thinking. Don't know about the rabbit! Alice in wonderland vibes?

Mysterious as always! But a cool sound nonetheless.