Duality
Words me. music suno.
https://suno.com/s/e2KtkFweUIej5Gk9
Got this idea from one of jgkojak's song where mention the train rolling by. On train became two, two trains morphed :)
[Verse 1]
Blues and grays fill days
Gazes out double slits
Of window panes
Faces appears then goes
With each pass
Follows circular paths
In motion
[Bridge]
Orbital cows over moons
Spinning dishes on spoons
Laughing sporting Sirius
The fiddling cat spat
Pixelated dots on screens
Entombing expressions
Scrolling fast black blurs
Mindless words, is...
Epitaph
[Outro]
Dreams of seeing some day,
Sunrises and sunsets
The warm sunshine embrace
Never are tomorrows todays,
But, that's ok
Comments
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I like how smooth this is, has a good feeling to it, can't say I know what your message is, but so what...
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Thanks Tex, who new - a nursery rhyme "hey diddle diddle" was about astrophysics :)
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i like all the rhymes in V1 and the nursery rhyme orbital cows over moons. 😆
very laid back and smooth sound.
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Thanks muskie,
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Man, great opening lyric
Blues and grays fill days
Gazes out double slits
I like internal rhymes and the scansion was well-captured by SUNO
Great song - this goes on my playlist
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Thanks, that's too funny. I don't follow any rhyming scheme or scansion (tbh - I had to look that up :)) , so if there is one, it's purely accidental. I just write :) The bridge was me just rearraigning the nursery rhyme into gibberish to mess with AI's, because they are programmed to normalize untidy data and I had a mental block :).. which turned out the bridge I need to finish the song. The only time I worry about the cadence is when i"m writing edm, but other than that no. it's all free flow :)..
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No idea what its about , but it sounds really cool Bill
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Thanks, it's essentially - the wolf and sheep particle became entangled in space, then was observed and colllapsed into a single entity either wolf, sheep or both :)
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College kids might get this . I'm old and howl at the moon songs . I spent years and years working with hit writers , be conversational.
Who knows trends change . I bet you own a cat ?
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I am 61, not young myself ;)
This style of writing has been around since, maybe before the 60's. Look at King Crimson, Steve Wilson, etc..
When you sit down to write, do you say, I need to follow x pattern, or do you just write.
And, no, I don't have a cat. I have a dog. an 90 pound daniff named Roxi. 😂
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This style of writing has been around since, maybe before the 60's. Look at King Crimson, Steve Wilson, etc.. was thinking the same thing .
Roxi mines Roscoe , mix pit
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Nice! Like the double slit reference in there in the context of duality.
Bridge is wild with the nursery rhyme references!
I can imagine an extra verse here doubling back to v1 with "Greens and whites, empty nights" etc to structurally reflect that duality.
The choice of musical style is intriguing - I like it - bit I didn't expect it.
Never are tomorrows todays,
But, that's ok
Like those lines. It's a cool track.
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Thanks Owen, That's a great Idea about the extra verse if It can be done in such two not break the trio - Duality, Causality, Then Collapsse.. something to think about. :)
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