Walk On Fire

IronKnee · February 2

Here's one I just recently made a cover of. Let me know what you think. 😎

https://soundcloud.com/ironknee-877134982/2-walk-on-fire_demo?si=ff570c14f05f454e944e849e1b4eb19b&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

“Walk On Fire”

Words & Music By Tom Tognaci

Baby, I’m wanting you

Baby, I’m needing you

Babe, I want your touch

But, maybe, that’s not enough….

…Where does the passion go

When a storm blows out the fire?

Cold rain is all you throw

While I’m burning in desire

Fan the open flames

Stoke the heart’s desire

But, take a walk on me

And you’ll walk on fire

Baby, I’m loving you

Baby, I count on you

Babe, before you give up on me,

I’m hoping you’ll think it through…

…Where does the passion go

When a storm blows out the fire?

Cold rain is all you throw

While I’m burning in desire

Now, do you feel like letting go?

Well, baby, you gotta know

You take a walk on me

You walk on fire

I’m burning in desires flames

While the tempest in you reigns

But, if you’re walking on me

I won’t make it easy

It’s gonna get hot when you walk on fire

bhengen · February 2

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/2335/walk-on-fire

I think this is ok. would love to hear the original. another thought, maybe you, @StoneFlowers , @ElvisNash should do a song together, the three vocals would work well together.

MuskieBait44 · February 2

Very cool. sounds really good, quality is sharp. melody flows well.

nice job.

my 1 crit would be, i'd like the "walk on fire" to hit little harder. its good and i want more.

IronKnee · February 3

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/17726#Comment_17726

Thanks B... the original can be found on YouTube: Walk on Fire - Burning Passion, Cold Rain | A Love Story in Music

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/17728#Comment_17728

Thanks, Muskiebait

jgkojak · February 3

I like this style and love the chords in this song - I agree the chorus could hit harder

bhengen · February 3

That original is really good. reminds me of simon and garfunkel,. you guys really harmonize well. that was brilliant.

RainyDayMan · February 3

All about the sound for me. The lyric is fine, but it's the music that gets me in.

Really enjoyed that! Both versions :)

IronKnee · February 3

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/17744#Comment_17744

Hi B...Paul did the other instruments, beside my 1+1 guitar and singing. He didn't sing. He remixed everything and made that splendid video. Thanks😎

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/comment/17746#Comment_17746

Thanks, Rainy... I appreciate it!

ElvisNash · February 3

Kinda sounds like a Van Morrison intro , This is well written , Swings along nicely Tom

Good job man

IronKnee · February 4

😀

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