Cruisin'
Did something for the first time. Wrote a lo-fi style hip hop song. Heck of a time getting Suno to give me what I wanted with out flubbed words.
All comments appreciated.
https://suno.com/s/UOQtWG3IbJOvgxOS
[intro]
[verse 1]
Run to the store
Run to the bank
Run to circle k
Put gas in the tank
Everybody needs cash
Everybody needs work
Everybody says that
Their boss is a jerk
Friday is the best
Friday’s time, to Inpress
Friday night all the kids
Shake Off, all the Stress…
[Chorus]
We’re goin cruisin’…..
Got the stereo, on a beat
We’re goin cruisin’…
Boys chilling, in the back seat
We’re going cruisin’….
Weekends here feeling free
We’re going cruisin’….
Got nowhere we have to be
[Verse 2]
Hot rod Red, looking good
Pin stripes painted on the hood
Chrome on my trim and Logo
Turning heads, in a ’69 COPO (oh, oh)
[Fill]
Smiles on our faces
Put Miles on the pavement
Eyes on the low ride
Make’n sparks, as a statement…
[Fill]
Elbows out the Window
Laughing at the Pinto
With the spinning rims,
Driven by a gringo (ha ha ha) (yo)...(yo)…
[Fill]
Stopped at a red light
Everybody hang tight
Green, hit da Nos making
Flames out the tail Pipe
[Chorus]
We’re goin cruisin’…..
Got the stereo, on a beat
We’re goin cruisin’…
Boys chilling, in the back seat
We’re going cruisin’….
Weekends here feeling free
We’re going cruisin’….
the street, decides our destiny
[Bridge]
got four tires, and the road
We ain't lost we’re just far from home
We got girls Blowing up our cell phones
Sorry ladies, tonight you’re home alone….
(Yeah)
[Chorus]
We’re goin cruisin’…..
Got the stereo, on a beat
We’re goin cruisin’…
Boys chilling, in the back seat
We’re going cruisin’….
Weekends here feeling free
We’re going cruisin’….
Got nowhere we have to be
[Outro ]
We’re going cruisin’….(yeah)
We’re going cruisin’….(yeah)
Cruisin’ ….cruisin’…..
Cruisin’ ….cruisin'....
Comments
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Cool vibe. reminds me of summers cruising down pacfic coast highway, in socal.. fun times, is pinto with spinning rims a canadian thing? most cruisers are mainly chevies., at least where i'm from. and not sure what a copo is, had to look it up. you could drop the copo and just leave 69'. never been called a gringo, mostly white-boy or cracker. once a tiny-whitey because I'm short :).
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Sounds good.....easy to listen to...but cruising was something from the 70's and 80's. Kids don't do that anymore or at least around here. Maybe it's just because I'm old that I remember cruising. Every Friday and Saturday night, or way of socializing.
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thanks
Pinto being a a crappy car i thought it was a funny line that someone would spend money pimping one out. and it rhymed well. 😀
I initially had 69 Camaro, but ended up going with COPO, as the COPO Camaro is considered one of the coolest cars ever. i agree that most people wouldn't know what it is.
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thanks. i'm not sure what kids do these days other than ticktoc and nonsense. in my mind these are 20-24 year olds who work all week and put their spare money into fixing up cars and hot rods. Where I live they have a big Car show called "back to the 50s" in the summer and they all cruise around for week.
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Cool sound. Feels like something that could be playing in the background at a club or something like that.
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Kids still cruise like in low riders clubs , Not as much as the 70ties though
Sounds good man , jazzy hip hop
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thanks guys 🚘️
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When I read the title, it reminded me of Smokey Robinson's song, "Crusin'" but learned that it's nothing like it. LOL.
I love the vibe (a lot) and it had me bobbing my head. I would have liked to hear a group's name or a song title you were Crusin' to for this line instead of "beat."
"Got the stereo, on a beat"
"Crusin' to "Between the Sheets"
Overall: I believe you nailed it for your first time trying hip-hop.
Good job and I enjoyed it!
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thanks!
yeah having a song or a name there is a good idea.
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