Silent water
This is a old saying dutch
Silent water got deep grounds
Done whit suno
[Verse]
Silent water whispers slow
Secrets darkness seems to know
Every ripple hides a tale
Mysteries buried deep and pale
[Chorus]
Down below where the silence pounds
Silent water deep grounds
Words unspoken lost and drowned
Silent water deep grounds
[Verse 2]
Moonlight dances on the face
Of water’s cold and endless space
Shadows linger where dreams confide
Journey where the fears reside
[Chorus]
Down below where the silence pounds
Silent water deep grounds
Echoes vanish no one found
Silent water deep grounds
[Bridge]
Beneath the shimmer lies the truth
A secret locked since fading youth
Pull me closer let me see
What the depths are hiding from me
[Chorus]
Down below where the silence pounds
Silent water deep grounds
Pulling me in no way around
Silent water deep grounds
If someone whants to make it in to
Reall song pleace do !
Comments
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Very poetic.
Verse 2 awesome.
"Moonlight dances on the face
Of water’s cold and endless space
Shadows linger where dreams confide
Journey where the fears reside"
one thought on "Journey where the fears reside" if it was "Journey where my fears reside" to tie in where later in the song its referring to "me". 🙂
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I like this. Good feel to it. The style you're getting fits the mysticism of the lyric.
The way Suno is singing "Silent water deep grounds" bothers me though. I think it needs a pause between those phrases. Maybe put a comma in there and see if Suno respects that? But of course you may prefer it as is!!
Feels like this could be used in a film score, got that theatrical feel to it.
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I love the lyric. I will now go and hear how it works with the music. On paper, this is a great poem. Simple and short enough to make a great song with little problem.
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I couldn't make the link work.
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@Hardtwistmusic You can copy and paste the link into your browser.
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I real song ? its really just poetry
But thats alright , Sounds good
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Lyrically, it's very poetic and I loved the melody. It was mystic and melancholy, which I loved.
I wanted more from the chorus but based on the melody, I believe it sufficed.
Overall, it was beautiful and I enjoyed it.
Keep up the great work!
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I tried that, and couldn't make it work. I'll eventually keyboard it in and find it.
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I loved the vibe and the wonderful prosody between the vocal and the keyboard melody. Extremely listenable. Not sure what you think keeps this from being a "real song." Sounds real complete and good to me. I think you might be selling yourself a little bit short. Not many people are writing better stuff than this. And it's your lyric that drives the whole thing.
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Love the vibe.... hit's me in the right spot. Gorgeous!
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Sorry for my late reply. The old saying in Dutch. People who have deep thoughts usually don't have much to say until they start speaking. I also think it's a beautiful song. And i think it’s a great little song for a
Film or something like that
I Thank you all for your comments.
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