Gypsy's Box (Remix)
Words - Me; Music - Suno
https://suno.com/s/oTRYVkGKVno81zlF
[Verse 1]
In a misty forest
Of chromatic greens
A gypsy woman holds
A mystical cube
Lines and circles,
Puzzles to solve,
Price that's paid
Always costly
Ultimate sacrifice
Soul from skin
[Pre-chorus]
Free your mind
Purify your heart
Release your soul
From this plane
Are you ready?
[Chorus]
Heaven and hell
Pleasure and pain
Gypsy's box never tells
Hidden hooks and chains
How long can you abstain
From absolute pain
Will you ever escape
From infernal rape
[Verse 2]
Trembling fingers
Rotate dials and levers
Cube turns multicolored
Contorts and transforms
Final pattern locked
The sky shrieks
Hooks and chains fly
Grabs and tears flesh
Can you feel the pain
So much pain
[Pre-chorus]
Free your mind
Purify your heart
Release your soul
From this plane
Are you ready?
[Chorus]
Heaven and hell
Pleasure and pain
Gypsy's box never tells
Hidden hooks and chains
How long can you abstain
From absolute pain
Will you ever escape
From infernal rape
[Verse 3]
Skin pulled taut
Suspended by hooks
Writhing in chains
Blood drains slowly
Into pools of sorrow
Shrills of torment
Echo in the chamber
Body and soul breaks
Flesh and bones burst
[Bridge]
Do you ever regret
Your choices made
That cannot change
Time moves forward
[Outro]
A weeping Marian bleeds
Featherless doves cry
Fragmented torn skin
Lies on stained floors
Soul from mind released
Into the mystic cube
Perpetual suffering
Is nevermore
Comments
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Is this built around some existing tale or concept Bill? If so it's not one I'm familiar with.
Really strong contrasts in it. Sort of heaven and hell I guess.
It's not my genre, but it's powerful, and feels polished.
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Thanks for the comment Owen. I took this song - https://suno.com/s/QLjVtriREvgZNqyl and made it more creepycore (i made that up). And reworked the lyrics to fit more in the 4/4 beat that's metalcore / acid trance mix.
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Creepycore! I like that. :)
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Well ya got the promts down , it does sound creepy
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Thanks Elvis, But I didn't prompt that creepy voice, suno just add it. I used that identical prompt in another song, and it didn't add it. The downside to suno, is you gets what you gets regardless
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I could sing it for you my life’s a nightmare I might sound less creepy lol1
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Wow...awesome intro. I can see this going down a storm with the right audience. My only crit would be that there's maybe too many different sections. That's to my ears, but I'm not your target audience.
Whatever my tastes may be, this is a great track. You're getting the best out of Suno. Well done.😀
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Thanks for the comment, Chris. :)
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