Carmen Remix
Words Me, Music Suno
https://suno.com/s/DDGX7MFga6uQp96F
I was thinking of dumping most of the lyrics keeping only the refrain and chorus, and changing the last line of the chorus, it seems forced to me
[Intro - Softly spoken vocals]
A warm summer's eve's breeze
I stroll down an old stone path.
The seductive flamenco guitar
stimulates the nighttime air
[Refrain]
Melodic, passionate, stimulating.
[Verse 1]
Gentle rhythmically swaying crowd,
Seduced by the raven-haired goddess
Melodically she glides and twirls
Alluring, captivating, mesmerizing
[Refrain]
Melodic, passionate, stimulating.
[Chorus - Echo effect]
Dressed in red, sexy and exotic
Carmen's radiance is intoxicating
A seductress, devious, mysterious.
Creating sparks, hearts set ablaze
[Verse 2]
She spins around; eyes lock.
Time stops, if only for a moment
Her lips, sultry and mischievous.
hypnotically draws me closer
[Bridge]
Strings gentle vibration, a harmony
Slow, steady melody, our bodies mesh.
In the fabric of spacetime, entangled
At that moment, we are suspended.
[Refrain]
Melodic, passionate, stimulating.
[Chorus]
Dressed in red, sexy and exotic
Carmen's radiance is intoxicating
A seductress, devious, mysterious.
Creating sparks, hearts set ablaze
[Outro - Gently fade out]
As the melody wanes, like a setting sun
We embark on a new journey as one
into the expanse of the universe,
We dance on into the unknown
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Well how romantic
Sounds good Bill
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Thanks elvis.. that last line of the chorus, is like parting your hair the wrong way, just feels off :)
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Sounds fine to that line , a conclusion line . I am surprised Suno built the v2 so drastic , it leaves it nowhere to go in chorus
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A hard rock power ballad with soaring vocals, emotional intensity, and anthemic guitar solos. Starts with a moody clean electric guitar and soft drums, building into a massive chorus with layered harmonies and driving power chords. The lyrics are about healing, unity, and rising from despair — themes of love breaking through darkness. The tone is raw, heartfelt, and cinematic, like Guns N’ Roses “November Rain,” Alter Bridge, and Aerosmith’s “Dream On.” Big dynamic contrast between verses and choruses. Include a long, emotional guitar solo before the final chorus and a dramatic fade-out outro
I think you got lazy on prompts on yours , basically 4 or 5 words
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But take out artists , suno don't take that
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thanks Elvis, I'll give this a shot. no, didn't get lazy, was going for a specific sound, i sometimes only start with a few phrases to see how it sounds, then expand later. like this song - https://suno.com/s/4NXMy1SXpkEH4RGB, I only used 3 prompts and got the sound in my head.
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Depends on the artist, more specifically which labels they are associated with ;)
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Naw man thats why they got sued machines sounding like Prince , They changed that . Don't kill the golden goose . Did you know some YouTubers make a half a mil a month ? I'd like in on that action .
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Some of those people that I follow have been doing it for a while. the ones that make it sooner have a gimmick.
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Suno makes 5 mil a month
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Wrong link? Takes me to "Heart to Heart" by James Chiang?
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A powerful emotional metal ballad performed by James Chiang — a high-pitched male rock singer with a transparent tone, slightly raspy edge, and strong metal energy, His voice resembles Sebastian Bach from Skid Row: bright, passionate, and dramatic, Featuring soaring guitars, dynamic drums, and an epic chorus, performed by James Chiang (high-pitched transparent male metal voice, similar to Sebastian Bach)
The song should feel Disappointed yet angry, inspired by Impellitteri, Theme: A weary white-collar worker fights to survive the "iron jungle" of modern life — corporate pressure, soulless routines, and the quiet prayer for divine mercy amid despair, Epic, poetic, emotional, and introspective tone, Tempo: 78 BPM
Mood: Healing, emotional, hopeful, introspective, Instrumentation: Soft electric guitar arpeggios, piano layers, warm bass, slow drums with brush/snare, and strings rising in the chorus, Gentle electric solo in the bridge, Structure: Verse → Verse → Chorus → Verse →
Yes he's singing it , I didn't notice till now
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That's odd, here is the correct link - https://suno.com/s/7qOIXH2V2g5fNnPw
That's very odd. here is the correct link - https://suno.com/s/7qOIXH2V2g5fNnPw
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I don't know this person. I'm not following him, so not how the link is wrong :)
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I like it the way it is. If it were me, I'd lose only the first refrain. It seems out of place to me. . . but that's just me. This would work extremely well as an instrumental in my opinion. But I wouldn't lose much from the verses. I thought all of it was necessary to tell the story. I thought it was a really good song.
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Thanks for the comment. I agree about the first refrain. i'll just leave this for a while, then circle back later
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Well robots make mistakes also on wrong link . It all works for me , lovely tone on guitar ,Great job Bill
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