Please Don’t Get Tired of Me
I wrote this inspired by a relationship that was full of potential but ultimately was not meant to be. I wrote lyrics and came up with the melody. I fed both of these into Suno. This popped out along with a few other options but this one spoke to me. These are the lyrics.
(Please) Don’t Get Tired of Me
(Lyrics and Melody by: François Bessing)
Link: https://youtu.be/_pk9cAgpy-s?si=rW_RXw2VkBCJ5Z6r
No matter what you do,
No matter what you see,
Please don’t, don’t get tired of me.
No matter what they say,
No matter how they look,
Please don’t get buried by the Book.
Chorus:
It will be alright,
Even if we fight,
We can still be in love,
Even when we’re not in like.
No matter if we’re scared,
No matter if it’s new,
I won’t, won’t get tired of you
When we both want to give up,
And too tired to explain,
Let’s rest, tomorrow try again.
Chorus:
It will be alright,
Even if we fight,
We can still be in love,
Even when we’re not in like.
(2X)
And when we lose our way,
And we can’t see eye to eye,
Let’s not, let a good thing die.
When it’s just not working out,
And it’s time to let it go,
I’ll hurt but won’t let it show.
Chorus 2:
Could’ve been alright,
We didn’t even fight,
We didn’t give love a chance,
It was over before it began.
(2X)
No matter what you do,
No matter what you see,
Please don’t, don’t get tired of me.
Don’t get tired [of] me.
Comments
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Very nice! Lovely gentle rhythm to it. It works very well as a duet.
"Even when we're not in like" is a lovely line, and a truth to boot!
Good choice to double up the chorus after the first time.
I'm not sure why you switched from the positive in Chorus 1 to the negative in Chorus 2. I feel like it might have a wider audience appeal if it stayed with them together.
There's a pause that felt a little long to me at "Let’s not, let a good thing die." - but it's hard to control every aspect of AI generation!
Solid write!
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Thank you kindly. I left a couple comments and look forward to reviewing more.
I’ll make the edit tomorrow to have it end positively. Thank you for that thought. It would be interesting to hear it end positively. It would open it up to be used in weddings.
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Love the simplicity and brevity of the lyrical lines. I usually like the music that comes with such simple lines. Now, I'll go listen to the song.
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Loved the music, and loved the karaoke format that allowed me to enjoy finding a dozen alternate ways to sing it and to harmonize. Totally cool.
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This is good. I especially like the chorus, the space and timing coming out of the verses is perfect.
I think some of the phrasing could be better in the verses some of lines don't match the meter of original verse, and it loses the attention of the listener
I know you want to add some new twists along the way. Might be just how I'm hearing it
Sounds very 70's pop
Might consider changing the title to the chorus.
Good listen!1
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