Go on and Cry
Hi Everyone... I know that a few of you can't distinguish between a cover or anything else when it comes to AI, so I'm not looking for comments on the production values. I just want to know if you like the song or not.
It is a cover of my song, "Go On And Cry". It's a cynical point of view on our politicians, in general.
Let me know what you think.
“Go On and Cry”
Words & Music By Tom Tognaci
V1
Hey, what’s that you said?
What you gonna do when they kick you out of bed?
Say what! Come again?
What you gonna do when the big man hauls you in?
You say that’s nothing new
But what you gonna do when the hammer falls on you?
Well…you’re going to cry a lie
And you’ll make some fool hearts weep
But gator tears are sly
Go on and cry
V2
Hey, what’s that you said?
Just let them eat cake if they’re running out of bread
Say what! Now, come again?
You got your megaphone and the press core’s listening in
You say nothing that’s new
But what you gonna do when the ink gets spilled on you
Well…you’re going to cry a lie
And you’ll make some fool hearts weep
But gator tears are sly
Go on and cry
V3
A big shot, a fat cat
You keep your nails clipped and your cash in the laundromat
Say what! Now, come again?
There’s no telling what kind of dirt your hands been in
You say that’s nothing new
But what you gonna do when your white wash launders you
Well…you’re going to cry a lie
And you’ll make some fool hearts weep
But gator tears are sly
Go on and cry
Comments
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Well... it is my song. It's a cover!
Thanks. I've always endeavored, in my writing, to marry the melody, atmosphere and attitude with the lyrics I build in the creation of a melody..
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I think its well written Tom
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Then you have success 😀😂
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Thanks, guys! I appreciate it!
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Love the country feel. I feel the hook could be expressed in a sharper way. In a way that distinguishes itself.
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Thanks for commenting, Franswa.
Sharper, hu?
It's very much how I wrote it. I don't know how sharp your definition of sharp is. Any sharper just might turn this into an outright angst song.
I think I prefer subtlety.
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Excellent song Tom! Very catchy, very polished feel, as well as having some teeth!
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Nice cover, it gives the song a special final color!!! and of course, the song is great, with or without Ai.
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I hate that I love this LOL.
Great song, and you seem to have bent Suno to your will in covering your own work. That catchy riff sets the tone for the song.
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You are the best, M
Thanks
It is awesome to hear my song in this light. I get together with "Spaghetti Man" and he is a true AI whisperer.
Watching his fingers fly, coming up with the most outlandish que prompts that are, to me, unimaginable.
I love the results.
Thanks, Gavin!
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