If It Weren’t For This Fire (New Production)
Hi Everyone! I added a bunch of stuff to my newest song.....tell me what you think. As always, any and all comments are welcome, and first impressions are most appreciated. Thanks!
“If It Weren’t For This Fire”
Words & Music by Thomas Tognaci
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14563994
If hell is cold,
then it’s cold as hell
in the far reaches of space
So, here I am
at this wishing well
just dreaming of your embrace
All my hopes, every last red cent
pray this ole well is heaven sent
Lost in a world iced over
if it weren’t for this fire, I have with you
~Inst~
All my hopes, down this well, I send
If it’s not to be, it’s to be my end
Lost in a world iced over
if it weren’t for this fire, I have with you
If hell is dark,
then it’s dark as hell
from the far side of your moon
Just where I am
I can only tell
From your love, I’ve been marooned
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Sounds good man , pretty funny , Was written and recorded in the doghouse.
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Hola @IronKnee
It's a wonderful song, very compact, love the general sound but the voices that appear and disappear suddenly gives me a strange sensation on my ear.
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Thanks!
Thanks!
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Nice addition of harmonica and guitar @IronKnee. The backing vocals gave me start! 😁 You give the song a little extra colour with the additions without detracting from it's beautiful simplicity - not an easy task. Many a time have I lost a song to 'I'll just add this...'
Good work, bud.
CCB
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Thanks Crackin'.....lots of crits for such a simple tune. Crits from all over the net. Thanks for hearing it for what it is.
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