Out of time
Lyrics - Me; music - Suno
https://suno.com/s/3RLhU70KHMd6QmrX
[Intro]
I am, I exist, I am not nothing
I was, I existed, I was not nothing
I am something, but what something?
I was something, mostly something
[Verse 1]
Time is all relative to me, meaningless
I had relatives, but they are no more
It's all relative, I suppose, I guess
Time is nothing but revolving doors
[Chorus]
I am out of time, but not actually dead
Well, maybe I am, not decaying, though
I just meant, that time has no purpose
Somehow managed to escape time's flow
[Verse 2]
There was a book, a pretty bound book
With an inverted pentagram on the face
It spoke when opened, asked for a wish
I wished to be free of the human race
[Verse 3]
I was joking of course, then the smoke
I choked, now finding myself suspended
Not sure where, don't think I'm anywhere
Or everywhere, this is just so, splendid
[Chorus]
I am out of time, but not actually dead
Well, maybe I am, not decaying, though
I just meant, that time has no purpose
Somehow managed to escape time's flow
[Verse 4]
I remember laughter, mocking laughter
That's unnecessary, thought to myself
Be careful of what you wish for, human,
We'll, you must be pleased with yourself
[Verse 5]
I replied back, but realized he was gone,
So that kind of fell flat, and, here I be
Seeing all, seeing nothing, feeling violated
Abused, mistreated, but free from humanity
Comments
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I'm stunned, this is just breathtaking, absolute masterpiece. This is by far your best yet Bill, not possible to take your ears off it, outstanding. The best way to describe it is mesmerizing. What a performance, you absolutely nuked it with Suno.
The vocals and delivery could not have been better, if anyone is worried about Ai, they're gonna be terrified after listening to the quality of this.
Promote this as best you can Bill, this is unique!
Sid
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Thanks sid.. I upped the weirdness factor to 85% :).. silly lyrics. but on Suno in the 15 in it was posted has 18 views and 14 likes :)
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That is a wild ride, musically and lyrically.
There is a story there that you can follow though, so that makes it more accessible.
Certainly agree it's remarkable that you can get that music out of Suno. Not necessarily my thing, but wow!
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Thanks Owen.. was messing around with Suno's new weirdness button :)
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Wow, the style is so interesting. What were the prompts that lead to this? What kind of bands are being copied by Suno here?
The lyrics are fantastic and build incredibly.
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Thanks for the comment. this is the prompt I used - Experimental doom-punk with grinding bass, heavy drums, and distorted guitar, Spoken-word vocals with sarcastic delivery, telling a surreal story about cosmic isolation and a cursed wish, Harsh, weird, and slightly theatrical
I set the weirdness factor to 85%., which is what makes it odd :)
Not sure which bands were being sampled in this.
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Truly a voice from out of the depths - everything's that been said about it up to now is deadon - A masterful creation.
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Thanks for the compliment :).
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Great lyrics. The music and vocal was not what I was expecting when I first read the lyrics, but it's got a really cool vibe to it. Very Marilyn-Manson -ish.
Good job!
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Thanks.. Wasn't expecting this either, but it sounded cool, so I went with it. :)
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Love the changes that appear in a so unexpected way!!! personal demons and ironic ghost of yourself!!!
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Thanks mora, read an article about time having more than a single dimension, then thought it would be interesting to live outside of time itself :)
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The truth is, how many truths exist in one? Reality keeps showing us that we know nothing about what matters, hahaha. Everything is based on numbers, and it's clear that "our" numbers are not elastic.
Everything is imaginary, starting with time, which doesn't exist. And it's in that imagery that we move, a hall of mirrors.... where the daja vu multiply, right?
I once had an inversely similar but true three-dimensional experience.. scaring... but interesting.
Coming back to your song, I had a great time listening.
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I don't know if I agree with Sid, that it's a masterpiece. Trying to break down the review, wondering how sid think this is a Masterpiece.
He has said in my threads he doesn't have the ears, but suddenly this is a masterpiece.
He "Couldn't have picked a better vocal lol."
It's all about WHO is posting not what is being posted.
this is vague poetry. Not bad not good, think your trying too hard to over achieve.
The idea is to entertain and communicate , not try to dazzle with philosophical tidbits.
I liked the first bit of poetry you posted this one not really.
But Sid and I disagree on the magnificence of this.
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Thanks for the comment
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