Dance with my demons
Words Me, Music - Suno
https://suno.com/s/gKxkTkV3Zl2tLfPG
[Verse 1]
I am unhinged, clearly, so very true
It's not like, there wasn't any clues
But what's this, unhinged man to do?
Nothing, except to
[Chorus]
Dance with my demons
We do the sultry tango
Then samba thru the night
Embracing the fire's glow
[Verse 2]
To scream unhinged so publicly
And for those that also agreed
Say more about you, less about me
So I, I
[Chorus]
Dance with my demons
We do the sultry tango
Then samba thru the night
Embracing the fire's glow
[Verse 3]
I'm writing lines of monotony
Generates ear fatigue, see?
To mess with you, mentally
Excuse me, while I, I
[Chorus]
Dance with my demons
We do the sultry tango
Then samba thru the night
Embracing the fire's glow
[Outro]
A sign in a Christian Cafe
In bold letters it doth say
"Never put your self on a pedestal
Only God sits that High",
Funny, but you don't look like
Gods to me, perhaps, in this case
Try to act with a little humility
Whilst you ponder that, I'll
[Chorus]
Dance with my demons
We do the sultry tango
Then samba thru the night
Embracing the fire's glow
Comments
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@bhengen - You know what I love about your songs, is that I never know what I'm going to get, and I'm surprised each time.
I don't know if ppl know that this is mental health month, but each day should be awareness.
I like how you sent a message but made it clever, playful, and something to dance to. I like that you had a female sing it as well. This was brilliant and very creative, and I loved it! Lyrics and music were on point! I wouldn't change anything.
This was awesome! Well done!
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Nice song Bill , a bit odd dancing with demons
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thanks for the comment, I did not know that it was mental health month. when I wrote this, I was thinking of the attitude in the song I know what boys want from the waitresses.
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Depends on what the demons look like 😏
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Too funny. I miss the mark. See how your songs surprise me. :-)
Keep them coming.
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They're red and ugly
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Your demons maybe 😏😂
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ha ha ha
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I like that literal interpretation of "dancing with your demons" - the Tango seems particularly appropriate!
Not as keen on the music for this one. I like the dance vibe matching the lyric, but it didn't quite hit the mark for me.
Breaking the fourth wall a bit. Feels like you are speaking directly to the listener in some lines.
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Thanks for the comment... It might be directed in someone's general direction., nobody here. on another forum. ;) I don't know.. I like the music.. especially the chorus. If I were to change the music, what would be your suggestion? Nothing to me is set in stone..
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It's a good question! I'm not exactly sure what's bothering me about it. It's all a bit upper freq range. The drums are a bit repetitive, though clearly they fit the theme. It might be just me on this one!
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how about this one - https://suno.com/s/QExnjZjKQ2t60TYr or this - https://suno.com/s/XBgaQg3gF4svazBd
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I like both of those more, but the last one feels the better to me. I like the manic intensity of it as a match to the lyric.
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The first of those is Beck inspired. the latter is more like a punk band called GBH.
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There's a visual. A dozen demons doing the macarena in hell :) that's somebody's penance. perpetually listening to the macarena for eternity 😂
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