I May Be Down But I Ain't Out

Hello Songsters! This song, I feel could be sped up a bit. Please let me know if you agree and any suggestions are welcome.

For a listen ==> https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/i-may-down-but-i-aint-out


I MAY BE DOWN BUT I AINT OUT

V1

I may be sad

May be angry

I may be mad

Downright crazy

I may be poor

Destitute

Pullin’ a cord

No parachute

 

[Chorus]

I may be down but I ain’t out

‘Cuz I still got a heart to give

I may be down but I ain’t out

‘Cuz I still got a life to live

 

V2

I may be tired

Countin’ sheep

Uninspired

In neck deep

But I got a brain

Know how to use it

No hurricane

Makes me lose it

 

[Chorus]

I may be down but I ain’t out

‘Cuz I still got a heart to give

I may be down but I ain’t out

‘Cuz I still got a life to live

 

V3

No thank you, doc

Keep your pills

Got wood to knock

And rolling hills

Got Mary Jane

For a breather

This runaway train

Is a Believer

 

[Chorus]

I may be down but I ain’t out

‘Cuz I still got a heart to give

I may be down but I ain’t out

‘Cuz I still got a life to live –

Got a life to live, oooh-oooh, oooh-oooh, a-ha..


I may be down but I ain’t out

‘Cuz I still got a heart to give

I may be down but I ain’t out

‘Cuz I still got a life to live

 

[Tag]

I may be down but I ain’t out

I may be down but I ain’t out

I may be down but I ain’t out..

 

© 2025 Renee La Chapelle – All Rights Reserved

 

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Comments

  • @HummerWisdom - the tempo is fine. maybe a bit more anthemic, since it has a powerful message

  • Sounds good Renee , tempo is fine

  • sidshovel
    sidshovel merseyside

    Lovely song Renee, got it just right I believe

  • TammyB
    TammyB Texas
    edited May 22

    Renee- I really love the lyrics, and I can relate. The message, the positivity, and confidence to say, "keep your head up." Back in the days we used to say, "keep on keepin' on."

    I agree with everyone, the tempo is good.

    I would like to hear more of your vocals; it seems like the guitar is distracting me because it's much louder than your vocals. I also would like a tad bit rougher on the chorus, I know you can do it. You are probably tired of me saying, "rougher" but it's your vocals that make me say it. lol. Tina Turner is an example of "rougher." :-)

    Overall, this is a really good song, and I want you to get the max from it. 😊

  • Tempo feels good to me. Might be a bit rushed if you speed it up.

    I like the vibe and feel of it. Bill mentioned an anthem and it does have that powerful, uplifting feel.

    Good stuff.

  • Thanks so much, everyone for you honest comments, suggestions, opinions.

    Appreciate you very much!

    Renee

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