Crawls and sprawls
Words - me; Music - Suno
https://suno.com/s/PHbKYjdcEm7ri8sL
[Intro]
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhggggggg
Sanity, Overrated
My, my, my soul, Deflated
[Verse 1]
Gray room, walls of white
Bright lights
Gray room, walls of white
Bright lights
Octagon cage is might
Demons fight
Under golden lights
Angels fight
My eyes lack sight
Is my plight
[Verse 2]
Blacks from grays
Never goes away
Darkness mind strays
Never away, it stays
Songs are wordplays
Handle mental days
Keep demons at bay
Blacks into grays
[Bridge]
Minds mini-sized
When in forums
Ignorance criticize
Walk blind streets
Devoid, never realize
The point missed
Becomes toxicized
Think before speak
Again, I advise
[Outro]
Never make one small
So you can feel tall
Karma will make you fall
Humbleness you'll crawl
Worthless behind shawls
Facedown naked sprawls
Humbleness you'll crawl
Facedown naked sprawls
Humbleness you'll crawl
Facedown naked sprawls
Humbleness you'll crawl
Facedown naked sprawls
You become so very small
Comments
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Snakes and ladders, how clever to use a middle east theme to the song, very different and refreshing. Ai nailed it for you no bother!
liked it Bill, again very experimental and boundary busting.
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@sidshovel - Thanks for the comment. Maybe too experimental as this one has fallen flat 😂. Trying for a different sound.. lyrics not all that profound, may go back later and rethink some of them. It took 3 tries to get Suno from not screaming throughout the song:). There is such thing as Thrash and Scream metal, was trying to get melodic metal :)
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@bhengen this one SCREAMS! I love the way it's being sung. Kicks butt!
Renee
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Thanks renee, talk about screaming, the first rendition, it was one long scream throughout the entire song :)
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This is bad ass! Fire! At first, it reminded me of Pink Floyd (Another Brick in The Wall). True story this song made me want to drop out of school. Of course, I would never do it, but it was influential.
I love these lyrics: Clever.
"Blacks from grays
Never goes away
Darkness mind strays
Never away, it stays
Songs are wordplays
Handle mental days
Keep demons at bay
Blacks into grays"
Good job!
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I'm sorry to hear and I feel sorrier for that keyboard warrior. I'm glad you find solace in your music.
Keep up the great work!
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Well some people are just mean
Sounds good Bill
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@ElvisNash - I had a co-worker sum it up perfectly.. who pissed in your cornflakes :)
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