The Invisible Room
I have a serious problem, my head takes me to unsuspected places if I don't maintain constant contact with the ground wherever I am. I only go out to go to the doctors and for a walk when there are no people, so when I am in a waiting room, due to my lack of habit of being among others, I escape,I am an emotional Houdini... hence this song was born.😎
Guess where it was? hahaha
I hope it entertains you. I played with mixed musical styles and I like the result.
I am lost in waiting
that invisible room
containing everything
in which a clock beats
so slowly slowly slowly that
the hours seem not to advance
It's all fantasy waiting
an inmense space to fill
in which any thought becomes
a detailed scene
while yesterday and tomoeeow
perch on my shoulders
like two beautiful birds
hungry for my time
I was waiting without waiting
living and etering
not living not entering
in that universe with no doors
where I walked from my seat
holding on to my bag
until a voice calls my name
until a voice calls my name
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Another nice one, Mora! The song has a very modern, funky vibe, and your video is creative and vivid! Good vocals and clever lyrics, too. My favorite lyrics in your song are:
I was waiting without waiting living and etering not living not entering in that universe with no doors
Nice work!
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The music really takes one on a journey in this one @MoraAmaroLaLoba . I'm a sucker for an accordion so was delighted to hear that. This one really moves, like being pulled deeper and deeper into your world. The rhythms shift so well and brilliantly shakes thing up. Such an engaging song. Fine work.
"while yesterday and tomorrow
perch on my shoulders
like two beautiful birds
hungry for my time"
Beautiful.
CCB
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I don't think you are alone in the waiting room. I think this is so relatable! I love the tango-ish music. It's like you are in a dance with the doctors. I love it. Superb all around!
These lines are killer:
"while yesterday and tomoeeow - typo alert
perch on my shoulders
like two beautiful birds
hungry for my time"
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Everyone is in a invisible room lol
Sounds good you put your unique touch on each song
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I love the evolution of the music over the song and the various styles.
Lyrically, this part is my favorite:
while yesterday and tomorrow
perch on my shoulders
like two beautiful birds
hungry for my time
And your videos are always an impressive part of the creation.
Well done!
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This is awesome, M.................this seems to be much more than just a hobby? You produce these little gems at a prolific rate. All I can say is wow!!
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Sure you understand what I am describing here!!! To go out not going out, just imagining.... but with a so vivid feeling... hahaha Imagination leads me to unexpected moments....
Thank you, I am glad you liked it @icystorm
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Hola chico!!
Thank you
I also like this part, it's very descriptive, my bad English forces me to try to write simple but very defining words... Or at least I think so hahaha
Have a nice Sunday!!
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I really like this one, Mora. Musically, it's catchier than some of your work and I loved the tango beat. The lines about the birds are my favorites too. And how did you train them to sit on your shoulders for the video lol?
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Yes @Andrea I think it's relatable. When I hear a Tango I remember my mother, she was a Tango lover, I enjoyed watching her dance, so tall and beautiful, that dance of enchantment and conquest.
Doctors don't have to empathize with their patients, but sometimes that coldness behind which they protect themselves hurts the one on the other side. The best thing is to die with your boots on, and wherever hahaha
Thank you so much. Take care!!
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One of my favourites. I love the mix of styles here. In many ways it's everything I expect from you guys, but it's also quite upbeat which I like. Brilliant.😀
'die with your boots on...' That's a great title for a song!!
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Hola Elvis!!
Good morning!! Muchas gracias, you are always so "amable"!!!
Yes, we in an invisible room!!
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Yes, it's my favorite too!! Thank you so much!
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Hola muchacho!!! Not, it's not a hobby it's a life motor!!! haha I am many kinds of cars and motors. depending on the day!!
Muchas gracias @IronKnee
Have a nice weekend
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Hola @OnlyGavin
Gracias!!!! I like a lot this part too!! Have a use week end
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