Take my hand
https://soundcloud.com/sidsshovel/take-my-hand?si=abbadd795f3e49be8ac2782df98c814a&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing (right click then open link in new tab,) to open song. lyrics SS : music/vocals Ai
[verse 1]
There'll come a time, you'll need me,
fairweather friends, have all but gone.
The cell you're in, you can't get free,
all those hopes an' dreams, there's none.
[verse 2]
Promises they gave you, in the wind,
none, that would ever come true.
A castle, to stop those that sinned,
too late, the guards they came for you.
[bridge]
Take my hand, it's all that I can offer,
it's not much, but you can trust.
If you fall, then I'll be there,
To save you, save you from yourself.
[verse 3]
All the riches, an' your Ivory Tower,
can't keep you, from crashin' down.
Strangled by, the cords of power.
turn to dust, upon the ground.
[outro]
You sit among, the shattered glass,
of dreams, that once drove you.
It'll take time, for you to stand,
less, if you take my hand.
Comments
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@sidshovel - excellent lyrics and the music really goes well together. The true friends are there even after the money is gone.
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This one doesn't reach me emotionally. It's well crafted, but I don't really feel for either of these people, I feel a bit remote from them.
The music came out very well, like a song from Les Mis. or something like that.
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I am impressed, the song structure and Ai prompt were based on "I dreamed a dream" although the title nor the musical were referred to at any time. Well done!
Sid
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Hey Sid , Very pretty , Well $$$ come and go , like so called friends
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Thanks Elvis, some as predictable as the tides.
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Yup Sid
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@sidshovel sometimes all it takes is a hand to hold. And there isn't a person alive, rich or poor who couldn't use one. Thank you for offering yours. Now, for that lovely listen.......yeah, life can be a prison; mostly made by our own selves. Breaking free is the key. Pretty music, nice heartfelt vocal.
Renee 💌
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Another excellent write and song!0
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