Better in you
And here is song 3
https://youtu.be/UrXcpC-r6QM?si=wOmyOwX1fF_ohCXI
Better on you
I pulled on that old flannel this morning,
But it didn’t feel quite the same,
I guess it’s ‘cause you wore it last night,
And now it’s got your name.
The sleeves are rolled up, a little too long,
But you made it fit just right,
With your hair all tangled, and that sleepy smile,
Girl, you stole the show last night.
It looks better on you, all worn and loose,
My favourite shirts never had that use,
A little too big, but somehow great,
So girl let me give it to you straight.
When you're wearing it, you look so fine,
The thought of it, just blows my mind,
I could wear it all day, but there’s still one thing that’s true,
That shirt looks better on you.
I used to think it was just some cotton,
A little faded, and a little worn thin,
But when you slipped it over your shoulders,
Girl, I saw it come alive again.
Now it’s more than just some fabric and thread,
It’s got a new kind of shine,
With the way you move, and the way you laugh,
You make it more than mine.
It looks better on you, all worn and loose,
My favourite shirts never had that use,
A little too big, but somehow great,
So girl let me give it to you straight.
When you're wearing it, you look so fine,
The thought of it, just blows my mind,
I could wear it all day, but there’s still one thing that’s true,
That shirt looks better on you.
Now every time I see it hanging there,
I picture you, standing unaware,
In my old shirt, dancing across the floor,
Girl, I don't need that shirt no more.
It looks better on you, all worn and loose,
My favourite shirts never had that use,
A little too big, but somehow great,
So girl let me give it to you straight.
When you're wearing it, you look so fine,
The thought of it, just blows my mind,
I could wear it all day, but there’s still one thing that’s true,
That shirt looks better on you.
Yeah, I could wear it all day, but there’s still one thing that’s true,
That shirt looks better on you.
https://youtu.be/UrXcpC-r6QM?si=wOmyOwX1fF_ohCXI
Better on you
I pulled on that old flannel this morning,
But it didn’t feel quite the same,
I guess it’s ‘cause you wore it last night,
And now it’s got your name.
The sleeves are rolled up, a little too long,
But you made it fit just right,
With your hair all tangled, and that sleepy smile,
Girl, you stole the show last night.
It looks better on you, all worn and loose,
My favourite shirts never had that use,
A little too big, but somehow great,
So girl let me give it to you straight.
When you're wearing it, you look so fine,
The thought of it, just blows my mind,
I could wear it all day, but there’s still one thing that’s true,
That shirt looks better on you.
I used to think it was just some cotton,
A little faded, and a little worn thin,
But when you slipped it over your shoulders,
Girl, I saw it come alive again.
Now it’s more than just some fabric and thread,
It’s got a new kind of shine,
With the way you move, and the way you laugh,
You make it more than mine.
It looks better on you, all worn and loose,
My favourite shirts never had that use,
A little too big, but somehow great,
So girl let me give it to you straight.
When you're wearing it, you look so fine,
The thought of it, just blows my mind,
I could wear it all day, but there’s still one thing that’s true,
That shirt looks better on you.
Now every time I see it hanging there,
I picture you, standing unaware,
In my old shirt, dancing across the floor,
Girl, I don't need that shirt no more.
It looks better on you, all worn and loose,
My favourite shirts never had that use,
A little too big, but somehow great,
So girl let me give it to you straight.
When you're wearing it, you look so fine,
The thought of it, just blows my mind,
I could wear it all day, but there’s still one thing that’s true,
That shirt looks better on you.
Yeah, I could wear it all day, but there’s still one thing that’s true,
That shirt looks better on you.
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Comments
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I loved both songs as good as the first, you have a real talent.
What I liked more than anything was the use of the song structures.
They worked well for the songs and I like anyone who challenges conformity.
Well done, I hope you choose to park your chuck wagon and treat us to some more.
Sid
P.S. You asked about using the link?
On YouTube, click share below video screen, bottom left, click copy, paste at top of your TSF Discssion sheet. Have a look at one of my posts to get the gist.
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Thank you so much. I have a few more that I’m working on and will share as soon as they are done0
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Another great lyric. I really like this type of song with some specific down to earth thing representing love.
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I really liked this. It felt genuine and tangible, almost as if I was experiencing it. Well done!
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