Steve Sledge - I Could Have Died Baby
Here is a second new Song I made with my co-writer Geoffrey Matthews who made the lyrics to my music
Title : I Could Have Died Baby
Lyrics : Geoffrey Matthews
Music :Steve Sledge
Vocals Steve Sledge
12. Januar 2023
I COULD HAVE DIED BABY ( 2023 , Steve Sledge / Geoffrey Matthews )
V1
I was holding on a dream
That was never ever gonna come true
I saw you crossing the river
There was nothing I could do
And now it’s a broken adieu
C1
I could have died baby, died baby
Dumber than dumb
Dancing to the beat of your drum
I could have died baby, died baby
Do what you do
Now it’s a broken adieu.
V2
Was it such a sacrifice
To savor a moment or two
I saw you running for cover
There was nothing I could do
And now it’s a faded review
C2
I could have died baby, died baby
Dumber than dumb
Dancing to the beat of your drum
I could have died baby, died baby
Do what you do.
Now it’s a faded review
Seen you on the run
Kept your motor on (repeat)
BRIDGE
Pull my world apart
Take it stone by stone
Shoot me through the heart
Here in San Antoine
Pull my world apart
Take it down and down and down
What the hell is wrong with you?
C3
I could have died baby, died baby
Dumber than dumb
Dancing to the beat of your drum
I could have died baby, died baby
Do what you do
And now it’s a faded review
Seen you on the run
Kept your motor on
Comments
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That's a killer chorus and makes the song! Definitely something to sing along with.
The rhythm of the verses is harder to sing along with - but it's unusual and memorable. Overall I think it's a feature rather than a problem.
Nice variation in the bridge
Good musicianship, nice mix. Very polished feel.
I think this could be very popular if you can get it out there.
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Thanks for your thoughts and yes, it’s an unusual bridge :-)0
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Wow..this is just so well written and produced. I'd say this is very commercial. Whatever, there's nothing to criticise here. I really enjoyed it. And, yes, the bridge is great - that really works.😀
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Thank you so much !!! Today I have remixed the vocals, so they sit more in the mix and not so much upfront
https://youtu.be/VqGNckYSd-00 -
Sorry : https://youtu.be/FqSGlTixaNU
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